The Ghost Town Story-1-Chapter-1

[Tapanator]

CHAPTER-1-THE STARTING
       *BOOM*CRASH*AHHHHH* I woke up by the noises outside thinking in my mine what is happening. I got up and look out the window didn't see anything. I started walking down stairs *ghhhshhh*The glass broke* I looked around and a saw a little green ball. IT WAS A GRENADE THEN *BANG*. It knocked me down the stairs. Well I am not going outside. I got up and walk to the TV and turned it on.*SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH* The TV didn't work then blinking was 666. I start getting freaked out of my mine. I knew I had a shotgun under my bed. I was walking up the stairs to my room. I got in the room the light were out and the computer said *HE IS COMING*. I got my shotgun under the bed I looked for the shell there were only 10. Good enough for me I loaded the gun with 4 shells. I started my way down the stairs. The lights were all out but I had my shotgun I was not scared. Then I open the door to outside I started my way for my trunk. There was no one it was like blank. I look where the grenade enter I saw a little red eye. I got freaked out and I shot. Then it was gone I didn't see no blood on the window. Then *pshhhhhh*bang*glang*ssssssssssssss* Then the lights turn red and started to flicker. Then I see a black figure walking down stairs. That did it I start to run like crazy. Got into my truck and started to drive. Now I am out of the City thank GOD.

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[kakashi11]

Chapter 2
The main character gets eaten by a monster. the end.

but really, general descussion?

[Tapanator]

There will be more chapters

[Soviless]

This should be in creativity.

[Rookie]

Lol its SupDog?12

[Riceman]

If a grenade just explode near me I don't think I would just go watch TV, what the heck?  If you got the idea from the Scary Story topic I don't think the writing was as good. I don't mean to criticize but this story was not very good. Good try though, if you are going to write again go ahead! I am waiting for something amazing from you.  

[Tapanator]

The new one is up if you want to know

[Sket]

If a grenade just explode near me I don't think I would just go watch TV, what the heck? Anyways I guess it's an OK story. If you got the idea from the Scary Story topic I don't think the writing was as good. I don't mean to criticize but this story was not very good. Good try though, if you are going to write again go ahead! I am waiting for something amazing from you. 

BOOM lets watch spongebob 

[Kobewarrior]

Lol its SupDog?12

Remember'd that kid. I laughed so hard at this.

[burnness99]

Pretty good, although the grammar made it a little hard to read if you're used to reading with correct grammar. (Hooray for not going on blockland for about a week!)

[Riceman]

BOOM lets watch spongebob 

I lol'd at this. Cookie for you!

[Tlc2010]

I call Bullstuff. To be honest, i really
can say that this is a very bad story.

[Kobewarrior]

I call Bullstuff. To be honest, i really
can say that this is a very bad story.

Someone finally spoke the truth.

[Rookie]

Soldier 1: GRENADE GET DOWN
BOOM
Soldier 2: MY LEGS! MY LEGS ARE GONE! Lets go watch some tv.
Soldier 1: Awesome.

[Riceman]

If a grenade just explode near me I don't think I would just go watch TV, what the heck? If you got the idea from the Scary Story topic I don't think the writing was as good. I don't mean to criticize but this story was not very good. Good try though, if you are going to write again go ahead! I am waiting for something amazing from you.