"A phosphorescent or spectral light that that is alleged to be an indication of death." Or as it is better known, a will-o'-the-wisp: an illusion that misleads.
Great start there, although I would like your permission to turn that into a different story, a senseless evil story.
So I was right :o Watching the Elfen Lied opening several times has come in handy. Kyrie Ignis Divine Eleison
Quote from: TheKhoz on June 25, 2010, 08:53:29 PMGreat start there, although I would like your permission to turn that into a different story, a senseless evil story.
Quote from: TheKhoz on June 25, 2010, 08:53:29 PMGreat start there, although I would like your permission to turn that into a different story, a senseless evil story. Elaborate.
Elaborate.
I would just take the beginning, but make a sort of "Nightmare on Elm St." Story, where when you "wake up" you don't really.
Wait.. that was it? D=I hate stories like this, the ones that end to shortly.
I just finished this short story...
What else did you expect?
Thanks guys.I was writing a novel but it started going nowhere. The only other thing I've written that I didn't delete was a torture story.Wut. :oThis was based on something that has happened to me recently. It is also to be applied to a few other situations, the metaphors can be pretty wide.I've been working on one on and off that is told from a narrative point of view. Thanks though.Cool, thanks. I don't think I'd ever have the patience to write a full book though.
Why do you have to use my introduction?
