SirLancelot's EoB Application

[SirLancelot7]

This is an easy Cave Challenge that I made a while ago, that I'm finally putting to decent use.  
The first thing you encounter in the cave.  I bolded the spots to make it easy to see, but in the real challenge I wouldn't do that.

A pitfall into lava.

A view from the bottom of the cavern

Looking down from the top of the cavern

A cavern filled with lava with stones to hop across.  Some stones break after touched for a second.

The slide

The end?


I realize this is spammy.  I think this was made before cubes.. and before I really gained building experience.  Constructive criticism appreciated.  Rate x/10, but realize this isn't near my best work.

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[CinderTheCat]

7/10

[_Jagsad_]

8/10

[Shard]

7.5/10

Could we see a save file? We could take a better look at it that way.

[Daniel Rogers giratina]

8.5/10!

2 words.

Must play! 

[SirLancelot7]

Save added.

[GenaralSkar]

Spammy.

[SirLancelot7]

Spammy.

I realize this is spammy.  I think this was made before cubes.. and before I really gained building experience.  

Good job br0.  You can read.

[GenaralSkar]

Even if this was before cubes, I could be way less spammy.

[SirLancelot7]

I realize this is spammy.  I think this was made before cubes.. and before I really gained building experience.  

[Shard]

Ah, the save file you posted was a shortcut...as in it would have to be on your computer...AKA: Broken.

[SirLancelot7]

How2fix...?