Good job being specific and pointing out the flaws in order to help her impro- oh wait you're just a richard.
It doesn't really remind me of search for plornt. What am I supposed to be seeing because I don't remember any bees in SFP.
Needs more robot bees.
He said to expand on the Park area because he didn't.
Yeah, there was only like 4 panels of the park in the story.
Besides, it's based off the story. Sue can add in anything she wants.