Author Topic: NWB application  (Read 1599 times)

Ok, I've decided to app for New World Builders.
I've come to develop an admiration for different styles of architecture from many different cultures.
So I jam-packed them all into this one emple-like structure.
Hope you enjoy!






Feel free to rate, I'm eager for your feedback!
x/10

The building could use a bit more work


8/10

Actually, it's not that bad. But, I don't think you are ready to be in NWB yet.

Keep working, it is a rather good build; but it's a no from me.

I'm going to have to go and say no to this. It's good, but lacks some serious detail and the interior is awkward. However it is still a neat build. 7/10.

The style seems relative to "I'm going to put some random bricks here and duplicate some of this over there!"

It's a no from me.


Yea the layout could have been more organized.
However I am pleased with it myself.
« Last Edit: July 06, 2010, 08:17:45 PM by Thar »

Yea the layout could have been more organized.
However I am pleased with it myself.
Attitude is key in NWB.  And, this, obviously, is a primary example of what we'd like to see.

Any suggestions on improving it?

I myself like it.

If this guy app'd for my clan, I'd say yes.

The terrain is too flat.

Sorry, but I think it has to be a No from me as well. Some areas are lacking in detail and it seems some areas are kind of empty.

Some ways you can improve it would be to fill in those empty areas with something. I don't know what, but it would make it look allot better then just an empty space. The terrain could use some more detail as well. Even something as small as a few rocks that will make it look more realistic.

It is a no in its current form but it has potential. Keep working at it!

I told myself that I would get to all the NWB applications yesterday but I didn't, so I'll start with this. I'm going to say no to this one. The stairs leading to the structure feel out of place for some reason (looks a bit brighter than the rest of the build). As for the outer wall, I don't have too many problems. The towers in the corners could've been a bit rounder though, and it might have looked better without those 2x black things on the outside of the wall.  As for the building itself, the interior seems a bit rushed, and the windows are a bit odd to me. I do like the rest though. 

NoI like the look of this but it needs a lot more. the style is well done, although the interior needs some work.
Attitude is key in NWB.  And, this, obviously, is a primary example of what we'd like to see.

Hey Thar!  Long time no see since the end of Wicked's first city RPG, and him as a whole.  Aren't those the buddha temple poles that you made on Wicked's?  They remind me of that certain male part of the body.  XD  But anyways, I like this a LOT better than the peach and grayish coloured one you did on Wicked's.  Nice job 9/10.