Need characters and begining for mah story

[Rookie]

Guys, I just need those three characters then you are free to make wild suggestions or poke fun at my story.

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[Fargeaux]

make the unconcious one a  religous dude named Blair

[Rookie]

make the unconcious one a  religous dude named Blair

Can I have a personallity and appearance?
Mabey specify on what you mea by rekigeous?

[Thorax]

- Someone who knows what happened, where to go, but did not participate in the catastrophe.
Need personality, name and appearance.

Lisa, a 25-year-old who assisted with the development with the machine was laid off a few weeks before the use of the machine. She understands most of what the machine does, but she doesn't know what the final details were that actually made it work. She has her theories, though. Blonde hair, blue eyes, medium height. She's very pragmatic and straight forward, although she does have a bit of a wild imagination. It's this imagination that helps her solve problems.

[Rookie]

Lisa, a 25-year-old who assisted with the development with the machine was laid off a few weeks before the use of the machine. She understands most of what the machine does, but she doesn't know what the final details were that actually made it work. She has her theories, though. Blonde hair, blue eyes, medium height. She's very pragmatic and straight forward, although she does have a bit of a wild imagination. It's this imagination that helps her solve problems.

Nice one, I will consider, tho I may change some things.

[Thorax]

Feel free to, it's your story. Glad you liked it.

[Rookie]

Hmmm, Im considering posting each chapter on the fourms as I finish them.

You like?

[Rookie]

Ima go to sleep now, keep voting and suggesting and I will reply in the morning!

[Rookie]

Bump

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Fuuuuu triple toast

[Night Fox]

I started writing a story on my dad's old computer.

All I need is some way to access the hard drive, since the computer is kind of broken.

[Rookie]

I started writing a story on my dad's old computer.

All I need is some way to access the hard drive, since the computer is kind of broken.

D:
Was it a good story

[Night Fox]

D:
Was it a good story

In my opinion, yes.

We might be able to get the computer to run long neough to get it off.
Should we try?

[Rookie]

worth a try.
What was it bout?

[Night Fox]

worth a try.
What was it bout?

A guy. And some lizard-human hybids called Siphers I think.

[Rookie]

A guy. And some lizard-human hybids called Siphers I think.

Ooooo