Moybus, you are an ass. It's supposed to look like this. It's a loose drawing, not a masterpiece.
Don't use the poor forms of art that exist as an excuse for what you've produced.
If you really have to defend a piece of work, to the pulp, by using specific styles that have already been argued as being absolute stuff, then I would suggest trying to do better at what you're trying to accomplish.
The work is not good. It lacks consistency, proportioning, value, proper placement, etc. They're both disasters.
