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Wrote this story for my Writing class:Sorry for the terrible layout... I wrote it on an iPod. I had to change a few things so it wasn't so internetish..."A good captain always goes down with his ship... Now go!"
way to be original, comad.
Would you like me to change it? Dramatically, Comrade turned to me and said:"OMG SUEZ A DUED!!!! HUE HUE lolololololololooollHUEHUEHUE ..."But seriously, I just realized that and I'll change it...
sure but no you don't have to change it if you don't want to. just pointing out what i see lol
can u guys let me in teh lclan
More work on Chapter 2:During my work hours, or whatever you wanted to call it, I snuck into the auditorium and began assembling my podium. There were three others there of higher officials I've never met, but one name stood out. The podium was a large metallic stand with sides. On the front was the name TING etched into the plating. The auditorium lights turned on. I turned to see Tom standing in the main entrance. "Thinking of running for Co-Leader?" He said with a slight anger in his voice.I hesitated to answer. I knew I was supposed to be in my cubicle. "Um... Yeah."Tom smiled. "I see you've noticed Ting is running as well.""What happened to ARES?""Comrade decided enough was enough and shut it down. Most of it's members joined a new organization called BAN. The rest of them came here.""And their ship?""Sitting in a hangar."I stood there holding my hammer. I looked back at my unconstructed podium, then back at Tom. The face on his screen helmet stared seriously at me."Well I'll let you get back to work."I nodded at started to go back to the intern building."Where are you going? I meant work on your podium..."I turned around to see his his serious face had become a slight smile."And good luck to you!" He said as he walked out. I stood there confused on what just happened. I quickly got over it and continued work on my podium.
then i jack the ARES ship and fly away
i vote tingalz mak
CHAPTER 4: It is about the secret organization, known as Krypt.