critique time

I like your shading and FX and stuff, but your characters seem super-cliche
I like to draw characters that look cool. In turn I end up making them like that. I try to make up for it in their story.
Also I think my FX is horrible but I'm glad you guys like it.
Draw menen :3
ooo draw me
I assume you want me to draw your avatars or something? You have to be more specific please.
Edit: Oh, and I never intended the long hair to be scene or emo or whatever. I just have long hair because of a haircut incident.