Poll

For season 2.

Give the artist a break and go back to your artwork Squig.
4 (25%)
Make the story better.
4 (25%)
Don't change a thing.
2 (12.5%)
Keep the artwork the same, make the story better.
4 (25%)
Give the artist a break and make the story better
2 (12.5%)

Total Members Voted: 16

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4

1.

Right as you're about to load your gun, Number seven charges.
Pow!

7: Urgh.....He falls over.
Scar: RAWR!!!!!
?: OstuffOstuffOstuff
*Slice*

?: *pant* *pant*
Peejster: NO!!!
Scar: RAA!!!!!! Blood.....so...thirsty. MUST FEED!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peejster: Psycho!
Psycho: Oh god, ?!! Peejster i'm coming!!
1 turn till Psycho arrives.
Pick a number

By the way, Not because I died or anything but, This story kinda sucks ass.
And the art is horrible.

By the way, Not because I died or anything but, This story kinda sucks ass.
And the art is horrible.
The art isn't gonna be that good for awhile because the artist is gone.

As for the story, I plan on making it better in season 2. New characters and more planned out. I also plan on letting the community take more control over the story.
« Last Edit: September 23, 2010, 04:18:49 PM by Squiggles »

The art isn't gonna be that good for awhile because the artist is gone.

As for the story, I plan on making it better in season 2. New characters and more planned out. I also plan on letting the community take more control over the story.
If this makes it to season 2.

I'm probably getting it finished today.


how come i died
Cus shotguns hurt. :P

NINJASEDIT: SHOOT SHOOT SHOOT. STEAL THE SNIPER AND SHOOT

5!



Cus shotguns hurt. :P

NINJASEDIT: SHOOT SHOOT SHOOT. STEAL THE SNIPER AND SHOOT

5!

The cave was far off, how do you think she could see you..?

I'll still take that 5.









4.
Peejster: Ah! *She fires a shot, it hits his arm*
Scar: Puny human think she though, me smash.
*He charges*
Peejster: NOOOOOO!!!!!
Psycho: Raah! *BOOM*

Peejster: My hero....
Psycho: Is squiggles out here?
Peejster: No, I thought he was with you.
Psycho: He was, but Seff took him somewhere else. Wait, is that Squig and A.R.C. in the ship?
Peejster: Yes. What should we do??
Psycho: I...I don't know.....he might not make it.....



In the ship....
Squiggles: *pant* *pant* Oh no!
*Squig reaches the end of the ship.*
A.R.C: Hahah!
*Squig looks behind him as he runs out of space to back away*
Squig: What is this..?
A.R.C: It's a bomb, and you set it.

Squig: WHAT!
A.R.C: Touch activate, now if you excuse me. I'll be leaving.
*A.R.C leaves in a escape pod.*
Squig: *Sigh*, one minuet left. *He brings his phone out*
Psycho: Squig??
Squig: Guys, escape to Kupuska. A.R.C. has gotten away and.....I gotta make a sacrifice. There is a bomb on this ship a massive one....
Psycho: You're coming with us!!
Squig: No, I'm not. I'm saving this planet from blowing up. I'm gonna drive this ship into an asteroid and finish the job.
Psycho: Squig.....
*Squig hangs up the phone*
Peejster: What's wrong.
Psycho: We have to go, now.



Later on Kupuska....

Psycho: *sigh* The war is over.
Peejster: Not entirely....
Psycho: Right, I Squig said A.R.C got away. I have bad feelings.
Peejster: Who knows what's gonna happen.......

In space.....
Squig: Alright, it's time. Ameela....I'm COMING!!!!!!
*Squig turns on full power.*

THE END
To be continued.....
WITH
Better storyline.
You guys get more control over story (Sorry about not giving you much control on this one)
LONGER With a better storyline it should be longer if you guys like it atleast.
Different artwork...(maybe)


Did that blow up your mind?????


Did that blow up your mind?????
No, It blew up half of my brain cells.