Author Topic: Free Writing  (Read 1086 times)

Basicly just felt like typing out a novel to relieve some stress. I'm literly typing this out of the blue. Basicly just free writing. Hope you like it. Also post if you want more.

Chapter 1
     Run. That's the only thought I can conjure through my headache. Why can't I remember... I look down to see myself wearing a blood soaked, brown leather jacket with a fur lining. I'm not bleeding so I conclude it's not my blood but I would have preferred my first conclusion. Did I murder someone? Maybe that's why I'm running... The thunder jerks me back into reality and rain begins to fall in a soothing, rythmatic pattern. My feet begin to work again but my head shows no improvement. Finally after jogging through the rain, my brain begins to work and I decide to to take refuge in one of the shops. I shuffle into the store, shivering from the rain, and I take a view of my surroundings. There's nobody. No customers. No employees. No shop keeper. Nobody...
     Instead of panicking I try to rationilize my situation but I cannot find an explination. I sit on a metal bench with a red cushion and realize I'm fatigued. In an attempt to recover, I let my head droop and let my eyes rest. I start brown townyzing small things like my shoes. I'm wearing white tennis shoes that appear to be brown now from the mud with a logo of an S. Skinners? No that's not it. Ah yes, Sketchers. I let out a sigh from the relief of beginning to remember things, no matter how small. I take advantage of the abscence of a living being and I begin to browse the clothing the store has to offer. I abandon my blood stained coat to exchange it for a black hoodie. While I take off my jacket I realize there's something in the pocket. It's a Beretta M9. My hands begin to work like a craftsman with the knowledge of many years. I eject the clip to see three bullets remaining. How did I know how to do that? My eyes catch the blood on my jacket and I finally see the bigger question. Why is there only three bullets remaining in the gun that I carry...
« Last Edit: August 30, 2010, 11:20:52 PM by keonesan »


Was it from Night Fox?

Seriously? Must you take the smallest things out of context?

Seriously? Must you take the smallest things out of context?
Ok how about this.

It looks like a good start to a story, however, I personally don't like novels that have action in them. Its very average.

lol novels made by teenagers on forums

lol novels made by teenagers on forums

Lol, trolls bashing teenagers on the forums.

Ok how about this.

It looks like a good start to a story, however, I personally don't like novels that have action in them. Its very average.

Yeah I know it's pretty average. I'm just free writing. No rought drafts or brain storming. I'm just writing whatever the forget comes out of my mind. Hence the term "Free Writing".

Lol, trolls bashing teenagers on the forums.
lol people that take me seriously

lol novels made by teenagers on forums
My sentiments exactly, I wish so many didn't think they were a great artist, granted that OP didn't say that, he said he was just doing it to relive stress.

My sentiments exactly, I wish so many didn't think they were a great artist, granted that OP didn't say that, he said he was just doing it to relive stress.

Exactly. I never said I'm a loving mastermind. But I will admit, I could do a way better job, I'm just free writing because when I plan something out, it just stresses me more.

Edit: Decided to change Subject title since I don't want people thinking that I'm writing this for popularity. I'm just looking for feedback and to relieve stress.
« Last Edit: August 30, 2010, 11:21:42 PM by keonesan »