My first ship, the HK-247 Cargo Transport

[PaRaDoX]

Hello! Im new here and this is my first spaceship build! I have had some slight building experience on my brothers laptop when he played, so yea. here it is:





Hangar:


Cargo bay:


p.s my ingame name is Mirasop if you want to join my servers!

p.s.s ive seen some AMAZING space ship builds, and if your one of those amazing ship builders, would it be to much as to ask for some tippers? or maybe come over to my server and "teach" me some tecniques? Thanks!

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[Robo Dude]

bad job wit h tiles and need more stuff needs a engine room and needs more stuff

[Sapient]

It's extremely blocky

[eddierocks2000]

Not half bad, but interior needs a lot of work.

[Weirdopup_09]

I love the outside!

[PaRaDoX]

Not half bad, but interior needs a lot of work.

bad job wit h tiles and need more stuff needs a engine room and needs more stuff

It's extremely blocky

Hello! Im new here and this is my first spaceship build!

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[Sarge]

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Learn to accept criticism.

[Grignard]

The floor in the interior is interesting to say the least.

[Sapient]

Hello! Im new here and this is my first spaceship build!

Just because he's new doesn't mean he needs any slack.

[shafin25]

Hong Kong-247?
:C

[man of smart]

It's ok. It's too square though, and needs a bigger interior.
Needs more detail as well.

[HikerBob]

Add some stuff in the interior. It'll instantly improve the build.
The exterior looks OK, but plain and the only detail is the ramps.
Well made for first spaceship build though!

[PaRaDoX]

and i will say now that i dont take critisizm in the best way..... its just me. been that way my whole life.  but ill try not to rage! lol

but as i said before, if anyone has any "tecniques" you could tell me or somethin i  would like that.

Thanks!

[fred da kiko]

what happens to this if it enters an atmosphere? it looks like the top would blow off and the insides would be sucked out and burned to a molecular level by friction... other than that it's nice.....

[PaRaDoX]

what happens to this if it enters an atmosphere? it looks like the top would blow off and the insides would be sucked out and burned to a molecular level by friction... other than that it's nice.....

i will say that the top level is a little taller then i wanted it to be...