Star Fox: Four Horsemen - like progress noobs

[canto xe]

Back with the popcorn.Anyone want some?

Gimme half of it.

[Ad Bot]

[Shadowed999]

Gimme half of it.

here

[Dusty12]

This is not a roleplay topic. If you people didn't spend so much time stuffting all over it I may actually have gotten some good feedback.

[Qwepir]

You've gotten feedback from the people who have read it.

[Dusty12]

On the first god damn page and that's about it.

[Madmitten]

On the first god damn page and that's about it.

forum of aspiring authors

[Dusty12]

shoo go eat some kfc

[Deus Ex]

On the first god damn page and that's about it.

I was there.

[Tingalz]

sometimes i want to write something

[Dusty12]

Then do it.

[Shadowed999]

On the first god damn page and that's about it.

I gave feed back on almost every chapter.

13 more post until i reach 999!

[The Russian]

I gave feed backdumb comments on almost every chapter.

18 more post until i reach 999!

[Shadowed999]

You know how to edit oh my god your so cool.

[The Russian]

You know how to edit oh my god your so cool.

I could have said "What feedback, all I see are dumb remarks" instead.

[Joltarn]

"yay we're back together."
multiple paragraphs later
"stuff, she's dead."