Definitely way better than anything I can do right now,
Do you have any tips for me?
Are there any good video editing programs that are both free and not just for mac?
There's your problem. I spent 90 dollars for my editing software. Anyways here's some tips:
1. Don't be afraid to amplify your voice with audicity or your vid editor, it doesn't rape your voice quality that much.
2. If you want to know how to make an intro like mine just wait, I might make a tutorial video on how to make intros.
3. You're not alone! Ask for help with video editing! I do it alone but that doesn't mean you have to.