Blood Lust (Chapter 4)

[Madmitten]

twightlight has poisoned my brain
now when i think of vampires i think of friends with makeup and black fingernails.

either that, or the count from sesame street

[Ad Bot]

[Dippindots]

The count is awesome :D

[Jerkface]

Twilight.

[Dippindots]

no forget off

[Ryuu]

I awoke to darkness. Well not quite darkness. I could feel things moving, all around me, into me, out of me.

Teehee.

[Dippindots]

Teehee.

ikr? Chapter 3 up

[Dippindots]

Some constructive criticism please..

[masterockets]

I like it, but it gets a little confusing when he talks about the man's memorys, the transition from past to reality

[Dippindots]

Thanks, yeah I can see how you would get confused.

[D.A.C.K]

Problably one of the best books I've ever read so far.
Except for Redwall and all the other Redwall series.
And maybe Holes.

[Deus Ex]

Post this on fictionpress.com
Constructive criticism always given there.
I like it, a good break from twilight *shudders*

[Pyrle]

Continue all the way.
Make this into a real book.

[Dippindots]

Thanks everyone :)

[Dippindots]

Don't stop commenting :D

[Dippindots]

CHapter 4