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Basicly just add upon the story in your own creative way. Remember there is no right or wrong answer as long as you can support your own writing. However you interpret my exert of the story is your own opinion! Enjoy! Also don't criticize other people's work, there are multiple levels of writing!

Rules
- This goes off of a first come first serve basis
- Your part of the story must be 1-5 paragraphs long
- Any wiseass or sarcastic posts will be disregarded
- Use proper grammar
- Mark your part of the story with a chapter number, it makes things a lot easier

Chapter 1
     The soft crunching of the snow acts as a metronome to nature as I briskly walk among the cracked pavement. A little girl grasps my hand and leads me to a humble clothing store. Her eyes fall upon a pink sweater with a fur lining as I look down and smile as we begin to enter the store. My smile turns into a blank stare when I walk up to the cracked mirror in the store, revealing me clutching nothing but air. Alone. Abandoned. Forgotten. My true surroundings are revealed to me as I begin to shift back into reality. The manikins only remain of dust and unidentifiable and pieces of plaster while the clothes are left in shreds. I walk outside onto the ash and into the blazing sun. I continue to walk without shoes nor socks as the ash burns and irritates my battered feet. The burning in the back of my throat finally forces me to stop my journey into the abyss. I retrieve a filthy water bottle only to throw it to the ground in frustration of it being empty. I collapse to the ground and the only thought my mind can conjure is, "I'm so sorry Maria... I'm so sorry..."

     I awoke from my dream world with a start, sitting upright in bed. My husband is asleep in bed next to me and the only light came from our digital clock. 3:30 AM. I sigh and rolled out of bed, slipping my feet into my pink bunny slippers. The wooden floor of the master bedroom creaks with every one of my steps as I walk to the conjoining master bath. I flip on the light and shut the door behind me, taking care not to wake my husband in the process.

     I looked at my face in the mirror, a young girl of 23. The bags under my eyes heralded my many sleepless and nightmare filled nights. My face was absent of it's usual layers of makeup and my red frizzy hair was in clumps all over the place. I reached down and grasped the clear faucet handle, the cool water gently lapping at the marble sink. I splash some into my face, the cold water washing away any thoughts about my nightmare. I took a quick glance at the second white door leading to our daughter's room, listening for any sort of racket. My curiosity got the better of me and I gripped the golden yellow doorknob and crept into her room.

    I awoke from my dream world with a start, sitting upright in bed. My husband is asleep in bed next to me and the only light came from our digital clock. 3:30 AM. I sigh and rolled out of bed, slipping my feet into my pink bunny slippers. The wooden floor of the master bedroom creaks with every one of my steps as I walk to the conjoining master bath. I flip on the light and shut the door behind me, taking care not to wake my husband in the process.

     I looked at my face in the mirror, a young girl of 23. The bags under my eyes heralded my many sleepless and nightmare filled nights. My face was absent of it's usual layers of makeup and my red frizzy hair was in clumps all over the place. I reached down and grasped the clear faucet handle, the cool water gently lapping at the marble sink. I splash some into my face, the cold water washing away any thoughts about my nightmare. I took a quick glance at the second white door leading to our daughter's room, listening for any sort of racket. My curiosity got the better of me and I gripped the golden yellow doorknob and crept into her room.

Well... That was a major plot twist. Anyways really don't know how to continue that. I'll wait until someone else does it.

As I went into her room I heard scratching. I turned on the light and saw that the window was open and she wasn't there! I ran down screaming "She's GONE!" until I got outside, watching a figure running under a street light, he seemed to be limping and carrying something over his sholder, I ran after him as fast as I could but I had to stop because of my slippers. I called the police shortly after and they said it could take years to find here. I didn't have years to wait. I took a backpack, some food, and...

A knife too, then as I came out of the room a green monster, that started making creepy sounds but I stabbed it in the gut. then a zombie and a slime showed up. I sliced the zombie's head off but it lived and swatted at me, which I dodged. then I sliced its arms off just in time for the slime to jump on me. i sliced its eyes, its moutth and an arm of a nearby skeleton, killing both. i looked out the window to see that I'm surrounded by these creatures.

This is not a sarcasm.

Then I got off of my computer being a minecraft rping friend and got a life.

As I went into her room I heard scratching. I turned on the light and saw that the window was open and she wasn't there! I ran down screaming "She's GONE!" until I got outside, watching a figure running under a street light, he seemed to be limping and carrying something over his sholder, I ran after him as fast as I could but I had to stop because of my slippers. I called the police shortly after and they said it could take years to find here. I didn't have years to wait. I took a backpack, some food, and...
A knife too, then as I came out of the room a green monster, that started making creepy sounds but I stabbed it in the gut. then a zombie and a slime showed up. I sliced the zombie's head off but it lived and swatted at me, which I dodged. then I sliced its arms off just in time for the slime to jump on me. i sliced its eyes, its moutth and an arm of a nearby skeleton, killing both. i looked out the window to see that I'm surrounded by these creatures.

This is not a sarcasm.

Disregard these posts. :/

Disregard these posts. :/
okey dokey

    I awoke from my dream world with a start, sitting upright in bed. My husband is asleep in bed next to me and the only light came from our digital clock. 3:30 AM. I sigh and rolled out of bed, slipping my feet into my pink bunny slippers. The wooden floor of the master bedroom creaks with every one of my steps as I walk to the conjoining master bath. I flip on the light and shut the door behind me, taking care not to wake my husband in the process.

     I looked at my face in the mirror, a young girl of 23. The bags under my eyes heralded my many sleepless and nightmare filled nights. My face was absent of it's usual layers of makeup and my red frizzy hair was in clumps all over the place. I reached down and grasped the clear faucet handle, the cool water gently lapping at the marble sink. I splash some into my face, the cold water washing away any thoughts about my nightmare. I took a quick glance at the second white door leading to our daughter's room, listening for any sort of racket. My curiosity got the better of me and I gripped the golden yellow doorknob and crept into her room.

     The room was dark. My eyes struggled to make out the familiar shapes of of her room. I saw the dresser, the bed, a desk, but something didn't feel right. An eerie chill went down my spine as I felt something touch my hand, still gripping the doorknob. What I saw sent my mind racing, a black hand dripping with pus was tugging at my wrist, it smelt dank and was riddled with decay. Maggots wriggled between its soggy flesh, its bones protruding at the knuckles. I could feel my skin sizzle under its tightening grip. My mind froze, I wanted to scream, but I couldn't...
« Last Edit: September 11, 2010, 03:45:55 PM by A.R.C. »

I dashed for my extensive gun supply

it was a zombie



I was going for "lovecraftian horror"

A year after the climatic defeat of Gnorc, a small band of workers create an experimental stationary teleportation device (STD). Upon activation, it allows a wizard to enter with his minions.

Then he proceeds to take over the world, but a dragon named Spyro stops him

And I thought I would bring dragons here first. >.>

then the kresh wipe out humanity