Need writing help.

[Night Fox]

Would you get in trouble for mentioning God, like in my last post?

If not, go ahead and add that, too.

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[VerticalHorizon]

I consider myself to be good at writing

I consider myself to be good at writing, I have an essay to write about the cold war, I have the entire paper written except for the conclusion, I seem to always have trouble concluding essays, could any one give me some advice on writing conclusions? - Run-on sentence

I consider myself to be a skilled writer, however I lack the ability to write conclusions in essays. I have an essay to write about the Cold War, and while I have the entire paper done; I still need a conclusion. Could I have some advice on writing conclusions?

[Altered]

kk

the cold war took place in antartica over 9000 years ago between 2 factions: red and blue. they fought over which color was better and finnaly decided on purple.

the end.

[JAW959]

Importance of what I write for a grade>Importance of what I write on a forum full of people who play with Legos on the internet.

[VerticalHorizon]

Just pointing out how quickly you contradicted yourself.

[Dusty12]

I should think informal responses are different when compared to actually authoring a piece of literature.

[skelolego229]

I once wrote an essay on candleja