Sniper Rifle Moddel (Second Update)

[Muffin]

Ive decided to try to make something other than a pistol. My most recent pistol, Which i havent posted yet, is very nice looking (In my opinion). I made a sniper rifle today, And im wondering if i could get some feedback. What should i add, Edit, Or any tips. Thanks guys.

I have made edits to the model such as: I beveled the Front were the first hand goes, I also added hands. I also made everything skinnier.
If anyone really wants to animate this for me and fix it up. I dont care if it runs with teh basic gunscript, it would still be pretty cool
Here are some recent pics.
Edit: People are veiwing the pics but not giveing me any feedback..

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[canto xe]

Could you post the model? I wanna check something. I wanna do something on it.

[Muffin]

I dont know how to attach the file, Its .blend and it doesnt take that file type. Ive never tried anything but pictures. Can you tell me how, Sorry.

[canto xe]

I dont know how to attach the file, Its .blend and it doesnt take that file type. Ive never tried anything but pictures. Can you tell me how, Sorry.

Well upload to mediafire and send me link in pm.

[Muffin]

Ok hold on, I havent used mediafire in forever Ill Pm you in like 5 minutes.

[Muffin]

Nevermind it when faster than i thought. Its PMed

Any feedback? Just because im talking to Canto doesnt mean i cant talk to anyone else :P

[canto xe]

Nevermind it when faster than i thought. Its PMed

Any feedback? Just because im talking to Canto doesnt mean i cant talk to anyone else :P

Umm i told you what i did to the model.

[RFW2]

Good, but the body/stock/clip/handle is way too wide.

[Muffin]

I made everything a little skinnier, And i added something that will either be the Bolt action Lever, Or the Blowback. I want to add a little more detail like around the stock. Any ideas?
Pics:

[Mr.jacksaunt]

I love you Muffin. That looks SO nice. You just need a scripter. Also, make that a blowback, and it jutts out a lot, make it shorter.
And detail for what it would look like in first person.

[Muffin]

What do you mean detail it for what it would like in first person? And thanks, I thought it stuck out a little bit aswell.

[Captain Crazy]

Oh, cool. You've improved a lot, Muffin.

[Muffin]

Oh, cool. You've improved a lot, Muffin.

Thanks, I try my best :D

[RFW2]

I still think it needs to be a lot thinner...

[Muffin]

Pics updated.