Author Topic: My Modern House (updaet)  (Read 4208 times)

The Modern House

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This is my most recent house. I discovered my ability to build abstract houses about a month ago and this is my second, and worst best, house. I am mediocre at just about everything else house-related. It is still a WIP. It has many unique features, such as a stream running THROUGH THE HOUSE. I may continue to work on this over the course of a few days. Please rate x/17. I hate you all.

UPDAET: Kitchen floor added, the island is also loveier. Jacuzzi is complete with towel rack, no more annoying long building, and JETS.

CREDITS:
Ceejay21- 1 tree.
Wampanoag-13% of the build, mostly terrain. Also helped wth the water idea, and pointed out some errors.
Fire Brand- 1 tree as well.
Wehrmacht- 79% of the build.
Others I forgot. (like Cca)

I am just pulling these percentages out of my ass. :D

I hope you like it.
« Last Edit: September 24, 2010, 03:35:58 PM by Wehrmacht »

Ummm, slide show doesn't exist...

try posting the screenshots here, i like the concept of the stream running under it, i've actualy been to a house where there was a glass panel that you could watch the water in with a stream under it, and a small fish pool/bench thing next to it, in the hallway

I click the link, but it doesn't how the pictures...

Like i said. Needs a roof. Looks to blocky.

Wait, the slideshow doesn't work?

Wait, the slideshow doesn't work?

Apparently, just for me. Can you pot the picure heere? forget this keyboard (sory for grammar

I'm adding the main pictures in. It'll be a sec.

Done.
« Last Edit: September 21, 2010, 08:26:04 PM by Wehrmacht »

Wow. That's incredible. I don't really like the transparent glass bridge on a pond. Make in like, a soft grey. It's too modern to fit the rest of the house. But it's still brilliant!

I am just pulling these percentages out of my ass. :D
That's nice.
Oh and 16/17.
Some parts of it are a bit too modern. and those trees are re-colors from gazebo garden.

If I may correct you sir, you did not look at the credits. My Friends FireBrand and Ceejay21 made those trees.

Sometimes it looks a bit too modern... I like the concept though. 12/17.

If I may correct you sir, you did not look at the credits. My Friends FireBrand and Ceejay21 made those trees.
Did they re-color the trees from gazebo garden? Because I'm seeing some pretty convincing resemblances...

Sometimes it looks a bit too modern... I like the concept though. 12/17.

Could you explain where? I am taking constructive criticism.
Did they re-color the trees from gazebo garden? Because I'm seeing some pretty convincing resemblances...
No, I watched them build them right in front of my eyes.


Could you explain where? I am taking constructive criticism.
Okay:

I think the whole build has a prevailing sense of trying way too hard to be modern. Everything is cramped and the spaces don't really flow because you tried to add so many features into a small abstract house. Make sense?