My zapt build(not done)

[Legodude77]

After seeing all these cool zapt maps i wanted to build one myself.I already have one done but this one will be the first one I will post.I dont know what to call it yet.And please don't complain about all the duplication.Also,this is not done.

There is three parts:
1. Streets(100%)
2. Building(25%)
3.edge of town(0%)

pictures:



On this picture the blockstang will sometimes disappear alowing you to go inside the building that it is blocking by shooting the glass to go inside.


second safe house.

beginning of second level.

elevator in this picture is jammed.

door is blocked so you will have to take the elevator.

I really need help building this.Also,if you helped then please comment and i will post your name in the credits.Please rate.

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[Legodude77]

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[TheArmyGuy]

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OH LOOK IT HAS BEEN 30 MINS BETTER BUMP THE THREAD

[The Doctor]

Cool, it looks great, keep up the good work, lego.

[Legodude77]

Cool, it looks great, keep up the good work, lego.

Thank you,im hoping to add explotions and stuff like that on the last level.

[man of smart]

Looks good. But it needs a bit more detail. For example, the wall behind the safehouse could be made like an actual brick wall. Maybe make window ledges or flowers on some of the buildings. Add pools of blood, wrecks and flaming things to make it scary. And what's the point of all the vehicles? Nobody would have a stunt buggy in the middle of the street like that.
Also, for the exterior-only buildings make a locked door or something. Add bus stops, benches and stuff that is normally in a city. Also, traffic lights and signs. I believe there is a complete street sign pack somewhere...

If you need any suggestions ask people, most will be happy to give you some.
And is JO's autoshop misspelled intentionally?

[Legodude77]

Looks good. But it needs a bit more detail. For example, the wall behind the safehouse could be made like an actual brick wall. Maybe make window ledges or flowers on some of the buildings. Add pools of blood, wrecks and flaming things to make it scary. And what's the point of all the vehicles? Nobody would have a stunt buggy in the middle of the street like that.
Also, for the exterior-only buildings make a locked door or something. Add bus stops, benches and stuff that is normally in a city. Also, traffic lights and signs. I believe there is a complete street sign pack somewhere...

If you need any suggestions ask people, most will be happy to give you some.
And is JO's autoshop misspelled intentionally?

thanks,the stunt buggy is supposed to be a wrecked vehicle that i surviver tried to get away with.(theres a surviver zombie spawn right by it.thanks for the comment.i did not mean to misspell JO's auto shop.I will fix that!

EDIT:my server is up so if anyone wants to join then please do.(ps,whats that server status thing i can put on this thread?)

[TheArmyGuy]

OH LOOK IT HAS BEEN 30 MINS BETTER BUMP THE THREAD

Yes or you could read my criticism instead of ignoring it and only pay attention to good comments.

[Pliny]

What Man of Smart said is true about the vehicles, don't use so many of them. Work on building brick vehicles that you can duplicate and modify throughout the build. You should also make the buildings a bit more detailed, they look plain.

The interiors seem okay, but the ceilings seem low, and there isn't much detail.

[Legodude77]

What Man of Smart said is true about the vehicles, don't use so many of them. Work on building brick vehicles that you can duplicate and modify throughout the build. You should also make the buildings a bit more detailed, they look plain.

The interiors seem okay, but the ceilings seem low, and there isn't much detail.

yeah....this is really the bones of the level,i really want to make all of the levels and then add detail later.

[TheArmyGuy]

Yes or you could read my criticism instead of ignoring it and only pay attention to good comments.

OR WE COULD

[Legodude77]

OR WE COULD

ok,im sry i didnt comment on your comment,just dont be so RUDE.

[TheArmyGuy]

ok,im sry i didnt comment on your comment,just dont be so RUDE.

Finally.
Well the build is OK , exept for the single color interior.
And don't bump every half hour.
Makes you look like an ass.

[Legodude77]

ok,thanks.Im puting up a server status thingy right now.
Edit:I need help,what should this map be called?I'll get the most popular names then add a pole.

[Ev Dowg]

Not sure if anybody said this yet but:

You should add fire and smoke around the vehicles and pollute the streets a bit more. For an apocolypse, this looks too clean.

Otherwise, 7/10