Author Topic: What would be the correct way to write this sentence.... (Read 1484 times)

Edman · October 20, 2010, 07:02:17 PM

I would buy several luxury cars, such as a Lamborghini, and a Ford Mustang, along with many others.

/\ Is that correct or is that incorrect?

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Rookie · October 20, 2010, 07:40:48 PM

"I like cars."

hotshot87 · October 20, 2010, 07:42:56 PM

I want to waist my money on cars I will never drive!

Nethog · October 20, 2010, 07:44:19 PM

I would buy several luxury cars such as:Lamborghini,Ford Mustang along with many others.

I think thats right O.o

dkamm65 · October 20, 2010, 07:56:02 PM

It sounds off to say "such as ... along with many others."

You're using "such as" to lead into a list of specific examples, but you use an ambiguous phrase at the end.

I'm not saying it's incorrect, it just sounds off.

Anyways, the correct way would be:

"I would buy several luxury cars, such as a Lamborghini and a Ford Mustang; along with many others."

Madmitten · October 20, 2010, 07:57:39 PM

i guarantee you this is for homework

Edman · October 20, 2010, 08:13:55 PM

Quote from: Madmitten on October 20, 2010, 07:57:39 PM

i guarantee you this is for homework

No im just writing about cars I will never have to take up my time.

TheScout · October 20, 2010, 08:23:39 PM

He just trolled you all into doing his homework for him.

Skyfrost · October 20, 2010, 08:23:51 PM

It would be a better deal to eat your money.