Aeris' Collection.

[Dippindots]

.Aeris. do you like my story?

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[NEkram]

im not spamming i just found his story

[otto-san]

The noise was quiet

lol'd

[.Aeris.]

lol'd

Really, that's all you can comment on? Not the wonderful metaphor following it?

[.Aeris.]

.Aeris. do you like my story?

Where is it?

[otto-san]

Not the wonderful metaphor following it?

Wow, you have no modesty at all, do you? 

Noise cannot be quiet because noise is sound.

So I 'lol'd' because it made no sense. 

[.Aeris.]

Wow, you have no modesty at all, do you? 

Noise cannot be quiet because noise is sound.

So I 'lol'd' because it made no sense. 

It describes the decibels the sound was at, which was low.

[otto-san]

It describes the decibels the sound was at, which was low.

I still laughed.

[.Aeris.]

I still laughed.

And I still don't get why. Did you even read past that part?

[.::Taboo::.]

Updated, and this is what I think the beast looks like, if you think it looks like something else, keep thinking that way. imagination is good.

that looks a great lot like the baak'li daemons in my sotry. :o except i based THEM off of the xenomorphs... what is that thing anyway, besides being a bit fat, ir fits a baak'li's description perfectly.

[.Aeris.]

It's a tyrant from Tremulous.

[WRB852]

i don't really think writing is your thing. sorry.

[.Aeris.]

i don't really think writing is your thing. sorry.

Care to explain why?

[WRB852]

small vocabulary, repetition of uncommon words in short spaces, and the plot wasn't all that interesting either to be completely honest. it felt like you were trying to focus on describing the setting more than anything, whereas it shouldn't really feel like anything other than a smooth flow.

[.Aeris.]

small vocabulary, You're kidding right
repetition of uncommon words in short spaces, And again
and the plot wasn't all that interesting either to be completely honest. it felt like you were trying to focus on describing the setting more than anything, whereas it shouldn't really feel like anything other than a smooth flow.

Doesn't seem like you read it, try again and read the last line in the op.