Author Topic: This is a story of a girl  (Read 1331 times)

Quote from: Matchbook Romance
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
And while she looks so sad in photographs
I absolutely love her
When she smiles~

Anyways, since everyone else can post some stories in this section, why not me?




Bearing Heart

Chapter 1;


Betrayal

It was, to be honest, a day, different from all other days and yet it felt the same.
I was at Ringo's again, which is my favorite bar. Just played some cards with my old friends, seen the same faces over and over again. But I knew, "Today, something's going to happen!".

"Excuse me! Waitress! I'd like to have another one of your pink panties, string if possible, if not then cotton!", I shout.


Well, well. Where are my manners? I haven't introduced myself yet!
My name's Jeremy, I'm 58 years old and a biker. I live everywhere I can. Most of the time you can find me at Ringo's with my Pals playing cards and pool.
But enough of myself. This story is about more then just me, you'll see.


"Here you go, sir."
"Thanks, Pam."

While I drank my drink I didn't notice that a young girl entered this piss hole of a bar. After a while and a few Dollars richer from playing cards, Aron whispered to us; "Guys, you've seen that girl that entered? Looks like she's a guys magnet, those bastards can't let go of her!"

After he mentioned that I've looked around and I've seen some guys brag about themselves and flirt with that innocent girl, even though it was obvious that she was disgusted when she just looked at these guys. I didn't really care about that but after they started to touch her! I can't watch someone doing this while she obviously refuses them to do that!
I stood up, don't know why probably too much alcohol,  and walked towards these guys.

"Hey, starfishs!", I said, "Don't you idiots see that she doesn't need your attention?!"
"What was that you whi-", and a god damn fist right in his ugly face. His pal stood up, getting ready for a fight. I said, "Wait a moment", while giving another few punches to that ugly guys face, just to be sure he won't interrupt.

"You son of a bitch! Stop punching Hal!", were the words I heard before I was laying on the ground, and the last thing I've seen was a shoe going top speed towards my face..







I'm a creative sonofabitch.
I'm amazed at what I can write just out of the nothing.

WiP, feel free to rate, constructive criticism appreciated

My old in-game name was jeremy.


7/10



So some guys beat up another guy just so they can continue to flirt with the girl?
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GENIUS.

So some guys beat up another guy just so they can continue to flirt with the girl?

what no what

dude sees girl get stupid guys around her
dude punches guys
dude goes back to play cards, or in this case, directly to the hospital.

Very nice story, i'd like to see more of your stories.

10/10

I JUst love the way you describe everything and you do dialogs the same time :).

there is not enough here to discern what i'm reading.
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It's not by Matchbook Romance.

It's not by Matchbook Romance.
huh?
what kind of bump is this i don't even

I did not notice the dates.

I didn't even know that I was no longer on the first page.

Hm.


This is a story of a girl

        Livin' in a lonely world