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Blockpocalypse

Blockpocalypse is a story about a Apocalypse that happens in Blockland (I hope this is in the Right Section)
p.s Constructive CritCIAm is aloud. if you want to be in the Story leave yor ingame name and how you were found in the story. Each new chapter will be released on the  Friday of the week. p.p.s I asked all users in the story if i could use there name

Chapter 1

   its been 7 years, 7 whole years since the start of the nuclear war. Only 15% of the worlds population is still trying to survive. It has all gone to hell, most of us are dead or we are the undead. Myself (Xentair) and my a few of my good friends such as Xiphos, D4arkParadox, GlaDOS, and Arkenov. We are hoping more have survived but the chances are very slim. The scariest thing yet is, the zombies weren’t created by the nuclear war, the zombies created the nuclear war. It all started July 4th 2010 when a case of blockitus was found a local restaurant called McBlockalds. A man named Iban if i could remember, he took a bite out of the block burgers and claimed to cut his mouth open on a Vile with a small green liquid in it. Later that man had a seizure in his multimillion dollar mansion, the paramedics come to take him but they were to late, Iban had died as of July 4th 2010 5:59pm. They put his body in the morgue but little did they know the vile he bit into had Blockitus in it, Blockitus was a testing disease to bring dead cells back to life to help fight other diseases like cancer and heart disease. From what I know, the Blockitus took over his body infecting it with a flesh eating virus that slowly peeled away the flesh on his bones, and also reincarnated certain cells. Tumours were common to form in the cerebral membrane causing the tumour to push against a certain part of the brain that brought out rage. This rage made them bite and rip at others with their nails, which was also another way to spread Blockitus. Iban infected 98 dead bodies in the morgue and those 98 infected 340 in the hospital. Soon they broke out and spread to over 9000 in a day. Russia thought the United States of America was Responsible and thought they were using Biological warfare to wipe out there country. So Russia tapped on USA's door with a few 10 million megaton nukes. Pretty soon the sirens were running threw the city of San Andrea’s and we knew we had to get to the fallout shelters before they hit. It was a year before anyone left the fallout shelter, We were suppose to be in there for 2 years but Blockitus was carried into the Fallout shelter. As we surfaced we noticed the ocean was nothing but a measly lake, the Plants and wildlife were gone, the city was destroyed, Only a few buildings remain. The Parking structure, the Adult entertainment, the pyramid. Those are the few i can remember. But as of today, We will survive. All hope is on the human race.

« Last Edit: November 01, 2010, 10:41:41 PM by Blaze0 »


-Snip-
What?
Don't listen to him, he's on something.


I guess your writing's alright for an underaged person, but you made to many real-life references like Mcdonalds and such which kindof ruined the atmosphere. Even if the story is based off Blockland (In some way) you don't need to only "use maps" in the story.

Major flaws:
Russia doesn't exist in Blockland
Russia doesn't have craptonnes of nukes and wouldn't straight up acuse America
If the US was the only place hit by nukes then who'd the world turn into a nuclear wasteland?
What happens to the zombies?

Im not under aged :c im 16. I made this in 10 minutes last night after a request by a few people, If i had more time to work on it I would. Plus  this is Fictional it dosnt have to be realistic its just something i was asked to do. I was given a senario by someone who joined my server.


Sorry, don't like it.
This was a hugeass bump. Why.

Also I vote Triforce tells us who those 'few people' are.


Needs more capitalization and correct grammar; maybe some punctuation too.

sorry but that was really bad

Sad thing is, I really don't remember creating this.

One blockhead, cheeseburger blockpocalypse.