Blockhead VS Blockdude Short Series

[billy1]

i created a short series with two guys, the blockhead (on the left) and the blockdude (on the right) They fight every short and i gonna add here in this topic when i gonna create more


short 1 [EDITED, more funnier]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVYx7rFaF38

short 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IR-3xQuwMq8 it's gonna be replaced by another one

more shorts coming soon, you guys can send me ideas here in this topic for the next shorts

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[Legodude77]

why

[Flush535]

Hehe. Actually looks pretty funny.

[Muffin]

They looked rushed, and there is no comedy to them.

[MrMulch]

They have potential. You just need a little more practice filming. I'd say keep working on them.

[keonesan]

Like MrMulch said they do seem to have potential but it's your lack of experience that kills it.

I don't mean to brag but maybe you should watch one of my videos to get some ideas on how to get good camera angles and such.

[Teneksi]

I DON'T LIKE YOUR VIDEOS BUT HERE IS MY OWN WATCH AND LEARN BITCH

YEEEEEAAAAAH, NARCISSISM

[keonesan]

YEEEEEAAAAAH, NARCISSISM

Because I was totally trying to advertise. Maybe I actually wanted to give him a few pointers even though I know I'm not the greatest director myself. :/

[Teneksi]

Because I was totally trying to advertise. Maybe I actually wanted to give him a few pointers even though I know I'm not the greatest director myself. :/

Why don't you actually give him some specific advice instead of saying "watch this" and linking to one of your videos in his topic?

[keonesan]

Why don't you actually give him some specific advice instead of saying "watch this" and linking to one of your videos in his topic?

Fine I will.

[keonesan]

To begin with you need to add more emphasis in shots such as in the first shot in your first short when it has a shot going down the isle facing towards the speaker. It doesn't capture the speaker very well nor does it present the size of the crowd well either.

There are some also unclear things in your clips such as there's a random chained up guy and after he screams into the mic it goes to another clip of the chained up guy and he's all bloody.

Explain boy, explain. Who is he? How did he get there? Why is he wearing those horrible jeans to go with that outfit? :3

Also lip sync with video was quite poor. A way I help with lip sync is saying it out loud when I film.

Another thing is that when it zooms into the 2 guys faces, the second shot was a bit strange and could have been centered better. Other than that the shots were pretty well done.

[Frontrox]

Well done.

[Treynolds416]

Despite your atrocious grammar, I enjoy your movies a lot.

[billy1]

To begin with you need to add more emphasis in shots such as in the first shot in your first short when it has a shot going down the isle facing towards the speaker. It doesn't capture the speaker very well nor does it present the size of the crowd well either.

There are some also unclear things in your clips such as there's a random chained up guy and after he screams into the mic it goes to another clip of the chained up guy and he's all bloody.

Explain boy, explain. Who is he? How did he get there? Why is he wearing those horrible jeans to go with that outfit? :3

Also lip sync with video was quite poor. A way I help with lip sync is saying it out loud when I film.

Another thing is that when it zooms into the 2 guys faces, the second shot was a bit strange and could have been centered better. Other than that the shots were pretty well done.

well... it's a little difficult to me to act 2 characters each time! Yes i made this alone in singleplayer and nice video

oh and i need someone to make the voices, my microphone is not doing well

[Teneksi]

Not that difficult.

For me, anyway.