My Dark Place Alone, A short read by Rookie.

[Rookie]

i looked into the deep black of the void in which i sat. it wasnt cold, or hot, nothing exists in the void. just me. just me. i feel the walls of the place i call home. dark, no feeling, there is noting, a imaginarry entity placed there as an obstical, impassible. i sat, in my dark place alone.


my dark place alone, my soul.

Original piece of crap ^
oh well, here goes.


I felt nothing. The darkness swallowed me, I sat there, motionless, emotionless, I had no intent to stop it.

It was nor hot or cold. Nothing exists in the void. No emotions, no matter. I am just an entity locked away for eternity, left to feel nothing at all. There is nothing. No life, no death, no hope, no freedom.

I felt the walls of my prison. There was nothing there. Just an imaginary entity meant solely to keep me here. Keep me en caged in the nothingness of the void.

I sat there. Staring into nothing. Sitting, in my dark place alone.


My dark place alone.

My soul.








oh well did my best
discuss/comment. I'm not the best so please don't be harsh :c

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[steve5451]

Wut?

[Rookie]

Stop with the smilies.
And it's not really anything. Just something I made up.

[Sirrus]

Oh boo hoo. We get it, you're so misunderstood.

[Rookie]

Oh boo hoo. We get it, you're so misunderstood.

nononono
Not like that
I just thought I would write it because it had been on my mind for a while.

[JAW959]

Wut?

stop posting facepunch emoticons everywhere.

[*Magick* Mage]

You live in Ohio, don't you? :(

[keonesan]

Interesting. Let me try.

The sweet bliss of the void overwhelms me as I seem to be flying. No, not flying, drifting; drifting on for an undefinable period of time. Hours turn to seconds and seconds turn to hours. The void retains no color, not black nor white. I try to feel around with my hands but they only grasp air. A shiver erupts down my spine as I realize that this realm has no heat. No, it's not the lack of heat, it's the lack of sense. I clasp my hands and my fingers intertwine with each other. Nothing, I feel nothing. I'm a bird in a cage, unable to move, unable to spread my wings and fly.

Soon the harsh grip of reality grabs me by the ribs and jerks me through the realm. An immense pain consumes my body as I try to scream but my voice is lost in the void. Suddenly, I'm laying on my bed, gasping for air. I look around and my head falls back upon the warm comfort of the pillow.

^^^ Pretty much a dream I had once.

[keonesan]

You live in Ohio, don't you? :(

Oh god lol.

Where have you been Magick?
I need my daily dose of humor in this drad forum.

[Rookie]

Well I was shooting more towards the mind of a psychopathic

[steve5451]

stop posting facepunch emoticons everywhere.

No. They describe well. >:|

[*Magick* Mage]

Where have you been Magick?
I need my daily dose of humor in this drad forum.

In a dark void, drifting - not flying, though. We can't have flying. :o

[keonesan]

In a dark void, drifting - not flying, though. We can't have flying. :o

Correction: The void retains no color. Rookie's does but not mine. :P

[Kira100000]

Interesting. Let me try.

The sweet bliss of the void overwhelms me as I seem to be flying. No, not flying, drifting; drifting on for an undefinable period of time. Hours turn to seconds and seconds turn to hours. The void retains no color, not black nor white. I try to feel around with my hands but they only grasp air. A shiver erupts down my spine as I realize that this realm has no heat. No, it's not the lack of heat, it's the lack of sense. I clasp my hands and my fingers intertwine with each other. Nothing, I feel nothing. I'm a bird in a cage, unable to move, unable to spread my wings and fly.

Soon the harsh grip of reality grabs me by the ribs and jerks me through the realm. An immense pain consumes my body as I try to scream but my voice is lost in the void. Suddenly, I'm laying on my bed, gasping for air. I look around and my head falls back upon the warm comfort of the pillow.

^^^ Pretty much a dream I had once.

If hours turn to seconds and seconds turn to hours, wouldn't that make all time hours because the hours turn to seconds then to hours which turn to seconds as said but then they would turn back to hours... which would eventually turn back to seconds then in turn would turn to hours which I think would make the time void so acutally there is no time and you are in a void with no time and I am a banana.

[Rookie]

If hours turn to seconds and seconds turn to hours, wouldn't that make all time hours because the hours turn to seconds then to hours which turn to seconds as said but then they would turn back to hours... which would eventually turn back to seconds then in turn would turn to hours which I think would make the time void so acutally there is no time and you are in a void with no time and I am a banana.

Well there is no trace of light in the void and therefore there is no constant, and time diminishes.