Comatose has Parkinson's.
God dammit, you're not funny.
Your lines are very shaky, you might want to work on stabilising your hand
It's a weird habit of mine, but I tend to make a line, then go over it with another line, giving it the look that the lines are shaky. It also could be the texture of the paper I'm using.
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All I really want to say is that you need a lot of practice
Yeah, thanks. That small, generalized statement is really going to help me draw better!
Anyway, that drawing is from about a year ago.