
I like her; she looks realistically attractive. Proportions of face are a little off; but an easy fix I can see for that would be reducing the distance from her mouth to her nose. Typically it's only about 1 ½- 2 fingerwidths. THere's quite a gap between the bottom of her nose and the top of the lip.
EDIT: Oh also her eyes are very far up her face; surprising as it is eyes are typically the midpoint from chin to crown of head