ok guys
i made this thing specifically to receive advice
i've looked at plenty of people-ular drawings but still there is something wrong with my method of drawing the anatomy right.

so instead of "uuuh"s or "wow"s how about i just get a bunch of
- this stuff and then i can become an master artest
no don't ask what i'm holding it's not important and i don't why it's there.
forget just realized i forgot a mouth