flat come on man you have no sense of perspective ur trynna make something look 3d and it ain't workin
also thats a character from mass effect???
perspective is really confusing and takes a lot of work to figure out
I'd rather get it so I can actually draw stuff with fairly straight and clean lines first before I focus on something like that.
and god it does look like one of them doesnt it, my inspiration was actually more one of these dudes except in more human-like armor