I think it is quite nice except the eyes are sort of sloppy and I feel the head is too far above his body
I'll work on that,it's a lot better in my notebook.
My friends make it look like loving stuff though.
I recently got apparently "hired as a artist" for their comic as i'm the loving BEST DRAWER IN THE CLASS.
They draw some of it too,so i don't mind,but it literally. looks. like. stuff.