Novel: Makanix - Various Events [Chapter List Update]

[Xinakam]

Interesting to read and the writing style isn't bad

Thanks. I try to stay in past tense cause it's reads better that present tense, but it's tough to do from a first person perspective.

Oh FFFFFFUUUU--- This won't end well. :C

Anyways, awesome. Glad there will be 2 parts instead of only one.

You don't know that. Just because it's my story doesn't mean everything happens in my favor... So far I've given up co-leader, crashed to earth in an escape pod, and got disembodied for 7 months... Does that seem in my favor to you?

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[Dippindots]

On my own project I am using present tense, and I have to go through pretty often to make sure I didn't richard it up with past somewhere.

[Xinakam]

On my own project I am using present tense, and I have to go through pretty often to make sure I didn't richard it up with past somewhere.

I always used to do that. It takes a little practice, but after a few short stories you just get used to staying in one tense.

[Dippindots]

Yeah I think I got the hang of it around page 20

[TheKhoz]

I have a rough idea of what happens, because somewhere in there, you have to win, and it's up to you whether to let me get the position back.

[Xinakam]

Yeah I think I got the hang of it around page 20

Me and my friend wrote an RP that was over 150 pages when we posted it into word :D
Stories are really interesting when there are two authors. You don't know what comes next.

[Dippindots]

Me and my friend wrote an RP that was over 150 pages when we posted it into word :D
Stories are really interesting when there are two authors. You don't know what comes next.

I agree, we did this thing in my class once where we each wrote a paragraph on a sheet of paper and passed it on. Of course some people tried ruining the plot but it was a lot of fun.

[Xinakam]

Wow the creativity section is slow...

[kanew2000]

Just gave this a read,it's really great.

Also,Infinia,such a great town before the map clear :C

[Xinakam]

Just gave this a read,it's really great.

Also,Infinia,such a great town before the map clear :C

Thanks!

And Otto still has the Infinia save, unless 1.3 killed it.

[Cyanian]

A bit excited to see how you play Dr. Cyan out in the competition seeing as I didn't really... yea.

Regretfully.

[Tomcat]

Awesome.
Cameo Please.

[Xinakam]

Since they will both be fairly short, both chapters 5 and 6 will be published at the same time.
Edit: Along with Half Life, Ep. 3...

[Xinakam]

UPDATE: the chapters have been bumped again and I've added two new ones. Chapters 6 and 7 have been added to equal a whole 18 chapters!

For more info, go here.

[TheKhoz]

MAK SIR. Complete. The. Story.