Novel: Makanix - Various Events [Chapter List Update]

[TheKhoz]

:D Coolio. :D

This gon be good. (Mehopes)

[Ad Bot]

[TheKhoz]

This is rather odd. Is my internet extremely lagged on vacation, or is Mak not doing his work?

*whips Mak* Work. *whips again* Work slave, WORK!

[Xinakam]

This is rather odd. Is my internet extremely lagged on vacation, or is Mak not doing his work?

*whips Mak* Work. *whips again* Work slave, WORK!

I never understood the point of a whip... Hurting them more only slows them down... Congratulations! You just bumped the release back by 2 weeks :D

[Kovita]

Add me to story :o

[TheKhoz]

Laziness is not a valid excuse. Frankly, I am pissed right now for several reasons. You not working on this only makes it worse. D:<

[Xinakam]

Laziness is not a valid excuse. Frankly, I am pissed right now for several reasons. You not working on this only makes it worse. D:<

You being pissed won't make me finish any faster and rushing it will only make the story crap... PATIENCE!!!

[Xinakam]

Just bumping this so I don't lose the topic. Chapter 5 should be posted by next week so don't worry, I'm not dead.

[TomTheGeek²]

*spoiler alert*

SOMEONE DIES.

[TheKhoz]

Inowho :D

*spoiler alert*

I DID NOT LIKE THE ENDING TO CHAPTER 5.

[Xinakam]

Chapter 5 is finally finished and posted. Sorry for the wait... I got lazy... y'know, Winter and such...

[TheKhoz]

Can I like, well, y'know, maybe...



Slap you? :3

Anyways, can't wait to read on. Very interesting story...

I might bridge off of this for school some time...

Also, I got the tank ref... :D

[Freeze]

I'll admit at the start of this I thought it was a bit odd. Like it needed more umph. But in the latest few chapters you've really stepped up your game. I think you need to work on re-reading you work as there are a decent amount of punctuation errors (such as 'I could'nt let this end like the co-leader elections.') rather than just relying on spell check. Still, it's a nice read. Good work.

[Kovita]

Ohey I'm actually in the new chapter.

[TheKhoz]

Ohey I'm actually in the new chapter.

What.

Where. lol

[Xinakam]

What.

Where. lol

I don't know. I might just cram him in as a background character...