CoM & ICA clan build - Generic City/Town

[Drewpy]

A city that ICA and CoM has been building for the past 2 days. There's really not much quantity to it, but the amount of quality is decent. I will update pictures over time.



^ A detailed house of some sort.



^ Main room of the house. There's more rooms but they don't really have anything put into it yet.





^ A generic gas station and mini market I built.



^ A night club created by Lego Man



A skyscraper that Ladezkik is now constructing



^ Overall view



Please give out constructive criticism if you please.

You are allowed to rate x/100.

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[Drewpy]

~Reserved~

[Jasa 12265]

Awesome

[breadboy]

What map is that? seems really nice

[Nikki]

Nice. I'd give it a 8/10 so far. The gas station looks a bit weird though.

[Kobewarrior]

First picture looks coolbro.

[Drewpy]

Nice. I'd give it a 8/10 so far. The gas station looks a bit weird though.

Yeah, i didn't use a reference picture, so I have to admit, it does look off a bit.

Thanks for the feedback guys! :D

[Corvette]

What map is that? seems really nice

Its Slate Sea

[Drewpy]

**UPDATE**

Bedroom that I have just completed - my bedroom


Upstairs of the main room


Skylight

[AverageJoe]

I saw this in that server, looks good.

[EndGame]

I like the lamp posts  in that last exterior shot; very nice. I also like the last interior picture, especially those blue chairs. Even from behind they look pretty cool.

As for the exteriors, they could use a little tweaking, notably in shape, for they all seem kind of square.

Nice job though overall.

I also like the idea of a combined clan build.

[Drewpy]

I like the lamp posts  in that last exterior shot; very nice. I also like the last interior picture, especially those blue chairs. Even from behind they look pretty cool.

As for the exteriors, they could use a little tweaking, notably in shape, for they all seem kind of square.

Nice job though overall.

I also like the idea of a combined clan build.

Thanks for the feedback guys! :D

Yeah the exteriors do seem boxy. You should come to the server and help out if you want. B)

I also like the idea of a combined clan build.

Yeah ICA and CoM are becoming pretty close. But of course ICA is only 1 day old! 

But you should take consideration of joining both clans.

[Sleven]

Alright, just because this build actually got much quality I'm going to comment about the bad stuff.

Gas station looks bland and also abit of weird in shapes.
Interior is even worse

Night club got too many windows and is bad arranged.
Too much small windows and random placement makes it look pretty awful.
Anyways, the night club is bad in overall.

Roads is too black, and the road stripes is too white.


Apart from those things. It looks excellent.
ICA and COM seems like some decent clans after all.

comica

[Drewpy]

Alright, just because this build actually got much quality I'm going to comment about the bad stuff.

Gas station looks bland and also abit of weird in shapes.
Interior is even worse

Night club got too many windows and is bad arranged.
Too much small windows and random placement makes it look pretty awful.
Anyways, the night club is bad in overall.

Roads is too black, and the road stripes is too white.


Apart from those things. It looks excellent.
ICA and COM seems like some decent clans after all.

comica

Again, thanks for the kind constructive criticism. I like how you actually pointed things out nicely, instead of saying "oh god this sucks" but everything else looks betr"

But you should take consideration of joining both clans.

[com332]

cool...