Author Topic: [M] App.  (Read 1666 times)

i have recently decided to apply for a clan and Meteor looked like the best to me. So here i decided to create an Italian restaurant, took me several days to complete and I'm satisfied with my work. It's the public that decides wether it's good though. Without further ado, i give you my restaurant.


Here is an outside view of my restaurant ^ i know it may not look the best but i put a lot of work into the interior.


Here is the outside waiting area ^.


This is where you make your reservation ^.


A view of the tables and chairs ^, in the back you can see the bar.


This is a private room for special people only ^.


A picture of the bar ^, not much here except the brick oven.


This is the kitchen ^, also not much here.



Men and women's bathroom ^.

I hope you liked this and if you see anything that isn't right, I'm open to constructive comments.
Warning: There is a bit of overuse of brown scale.

A special thanks to Hazmat for his colorset.
« Last Edit: February 27, 2011, 12:14:20 PM by bounty hunta »

Looks very heavily duplicated. It doesn't matter how long it took you, either.
I'll say I like the outside waiting area but not much else.

Who drives a segway to a restaurant?  :cookieMonster:

im sorry i wasn't quite sure how to make the tables.


Who drives a segway to a restaurant?  :cookieMonster:

THEY SEE ME ROLLIN'
THEY HATIN'

Also, to elaborate on my comment, as you said yourself:

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not much here
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also not much here.
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The whole thing just looks way too vacant and empty. The brown scale is rather dull, as well. Perhaps use some different colours or lighting?

Perhaps use some different colours or lighting?
lets not go Canadian here, shall we?


I think it's pretty good. especially the entry way exterior. My only issue is that the chairs and parking space outlines are a little wide. other than that it seems good to me.

lets not go Canadian here, shall we?

Canada isn't the only country to spell it like that, most countries decided not to murder the English language.

On topic: Did you post a link in the clan topic? If not you should do that now.

I like it, it's a bit of a block. The colour scheme is a bit common, but eh, it still works. I like the detail in the chairs. The sign actually fits into the build rather than being stuck on top like I see a lot. There's not much colour in the interior it's mostly brown, perhaps a few rugs or something would brighten it up.

lets not go Canadian here, shall we?
The Canadian spellings are my favourite, especially "colour". It kinda helps that I'm Canadian, eh?

Canada isn't the only country to spell it like that, most countries decided not to murder the English language.
Jolly good show.

I think with some minor colour changes this could be a very nice build, the only thing you need to remember is that contrast is very important, so try and use a wide variety of colours that fit the style.

I think it's a nice build but you need to fill the rooms a bit more (ALSO, delete some tables and chairs and put something else there) and add some more colour.

Until you do these things it's going to have to be a no from me. Sorry.

It's not horrible, I like the bar counter, but overall I don't particularly like it. It seems functional though, which is a big part of a build. A build can look awesome, but if it's not functional so what.

A segway on a parking lot?