So I read that out in the cold fic and
well
it sucked
Twilight seemed out of character the whole time and the last chapter was all like,
"duuuude, what happened last night"
"duuuude, we had a lesbo threesome with Luna and I got pregnant"
"duuuude, how'd you get pregnant in a lesbo threesome"
"loving magnets"
Also Sonic, don't be greedy, share hero with me.
I wish to partake in the chopping and eating of him.