A Simple Cottage

[FrozenEye]

Hello, Blockland forum! I decided for my first post on the forums to be a build that I made, note that this is one of my first builds, so try to be polite when rating it.

Front of house (Below)

View of entrance from inside (Below)

Pictures of back (Below)



Thanks for looking through my build, please note that there is next to zero interior in this build because interior is boring. Please rate x/10

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[(Hit Man)]

thats alright, but the deck at the back has no support and is too big.

7/10

good try.

[FrozenEye]

thats alright, but the deck at the back has no support and is too big.

7/10

good try.

if had had a better angle when taking pictures of the back deck, you would see supports attaching it to the wall. And I do agree the back deck looks to big, but in game there isnt much room.

[(Hit Man)]

yeah but i still think you should add some ground + some more supports

[FrozenEye]

yeah but i still think you should add some ground + some more supports

I will. I appreciate your constructive criticism 

[(Hit Man)]

I will. I appreciate your constructive criticism 

anytime.

[Sleven]

Yup, very good for one of your first builds.

Make some plants/trees, a ledge at 2nd floor, a stair up to the floor with bed and supporters/bricks under the balcony.

[Kobewarrior]

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=134188.0
My cottage looks a bit like yours at the front. I'm pretty sure this inspired you.

[Nethog]

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=134188.0
My cottage looks a big like yours at the front. I'm pretty sure this inspired you.

hes right

it does like a big like yours

[Kobewarrior]

hes right

it does like a big like yours

Hurr silly typo.

[Comatose]

Not bad for a first build. I'd say put up a more noticeable support for the deck in the back, add some ground under that, and then recolor the cottage.
7.75/10

[FrozenEye]

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=134188.0
My cottage looks a bit like yours at the front. I'm pretty sure this inspired you.

You actually did inspire me. I took a lot of peoples builds and tried to mix them all into one build, I hope you don't think I tried to steal it from you :(

[Sheath]

Outside is okay,  nice you bothered with a little bit of terrain even though its basic. Deck is out of proportion, dislike the glass between the two doors which lead onto it too. Practically no interior, you would have been better off just posting it as an exterior build. The desk and bed do no justice, you haven't properly decorated or even partitioned it.

[Yellow]

meh, the interior is definitely better than the outside, and the landscape is kind of boring, and I wouldn't have built it in slate

[FrozenEye]

Outside is okay,  nice you bothered with a little bit of terrain even though its basic. Deck is out of proportion, dislike the glass between the two doors which lead onto it too. Practically no interior, you would have been better off just posting it as an exterior build. The desk and bed do no justice, you haven't properly decorated or even partitioned it.

I was actually thinking of posting it without any interior, but i decided that i should add a few things. Thanks for your help.