Author Topic: Malestrom's Songwriting Thread of Blah (Read 2274 times)

Malestrom · March 10, 2011, 08:48:44 PM

So, now I shall post songs no one gives a care about!
*clappity clappity*

China Doll
I am a doll
My heart No longer beats
I have become careless
My actions are not my own
controlled by someone else
My dresses might be nice
But underneath there is nothing
to hide the scars!

Do you not see the pain
behind my glazed eyes?
Or am I another china doll
sitting on a shelf,
about to shatter!

My heart hurts
is it over yet?
Controlled by others
Unaware that their manipulation hurts!
A careless hit
And I tip over
falling,
falling!

Do you not see the pain
behind my glazed eyes?
Or am I another china doll
sitting on a shelf,
about to shatter!

I fall through the air
But my ears show no tears
I do not care
My sculpted face is blank
And my body is limp

Do you not see the pain
behind my glazed eyes?
Or am I another china doll
sitting on a shelf,
about to shatter!

So listen here:
Here I am
In a million pieces
yet none of them
belong to him!

inb4haters

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Joker Card · March 10, 2011, 08:50:09 PM

seems more like s poem than a song. inb4asongisapoem

Malestrom · March 10, 2011, 08:51:00 PM

A SONG IS A POEM, NUB!

Joker Card · March 10, 2011, 08:51:41 PM

Quote from: Malestrom on March 10, 2011, 08:51:00 PM

A SONG IS A POEM, NUB!

Persoanlly I can't see it being a song without a beat to go with it.

Iban · March 10, 2011, 08:51:46 PM

It's really, really good.

1. Post in Creativity next time.
2. Get a dA account and post it there. I'll even be your buddy.

Qwepir · March 10, 2011, 08:52:32 PM

I would too but it might get me banned for spam seeing as it's just bleeps.

Malestrom · March 10, 2011, 08:52:42 PM

Quote from: Iban on March 10, 2011, 08:51:46 PM

It's really, really good.

1. Post in Creativity next time.
2. Get a dA account and post it there. I'll even be your buddy.

Okay, okay.

@dA
rawrrrr

fine

Jetlok · March 10, 2011, 08:53:09 PM

one day I decided to visit my friend rabbit's house
so I went to my friend rabbit's house
what I found were the bloody remains of my friend rabbit
and ruins of what once was my friend rabbit's house
so then I left my friend rabbit's house and went to
my friend
frog's house

Azzurolix · March 10, 2011, 08:53:25 PM

Ew. Worse than that CRAAAWLING IN MY SKIIIN stuff made by Linkin Park.

Iban · March 10, 2011, 08:54:12 PM

Quote from: Azzurolix on March 10, 2011, 08:53:25 PM

Ew. Worse than that CRAAAWLING IN MY SKIIIN stuff made by Linkin Park.

How many richards do you have crammed up your ass? Are you going for a world record, or is this just your normal disposition?

Malestrom · March 10, 2011, 08:55:04 PM

Quote from: Iban on March 10, 2011, 08:54:12 PM

How many richards do you have crammed up your ass? Are you going for a world record, or is this just your normal disposition?

I vote that he is just a major jerk :/

Joker Card · March 10, 2011, 08:56:07 PM

Quote from: Azzurolix on March 10, 2011, 08:53:25 PM

Ew. Worse than that CRAAAWLING IN MY SKIIIN stuff made by Linkin Park.

You're a dumbass. Crawling is one of their good songs. loving kids who don't know good music.

Azzurolix · March 10, 2011, 08:56:23 PM

Quote from: Iban on March 10, 2011, 08:54:12 PM

How many richards do you have crammed up your ass? Are you going for a world record, or is this just your normal disposition?

richard count -1

Look at good songs and try to follow those, but in a unique matter.

I can go on livejournal and see lyrics like these on every page.

Iban · March 10, 2011, 08:57:54 PM

oh no lyrics about a broken heart

that's never been a good premise for a song ever

Azzurolix · March 10, 2011, 08:58:39 PM

Quote from: Iban on March 10, 2011, 08:57:54 PM

oh no lyrics about a broken heart

that's never been a good premise for a song ever

This is angsty. If you guys like angsty songs, not my fault.