Malestrom's Songwriting Thread of Blah

[Nethog]

You have talent. :o

[Ad Bot]

[Malestrom]

Care to use a smaller font next time?

Possibly.

You have talent. :o

c:

[Azzurolix]

I don't really like rap but you should try writing lyrics for rap. Seems to fit you best.

EDIT ; god i really need to stop flashediting ANYWAY it's still bare bones. Can't tell which genre would fit them unless you add the beat you had in mind when you wrote this

[Night Fox]

I would too but it might get me banned for spam seeing as it's just bleeps.

forget forget stuff monday bitch
I can't reach this god damn itch
stuff stuff monday bitch forget
this song is about nip/tuck

[Malestrom]

It Burns More Than Before

If I tell you the truth
It hurts more than before
I want you to know
How I feel but
But I know about you
And that whore. 
I want to say your name
No more!

It burns more than before
The flame of love
Put out 
My heart yearns for more
But I want to be alone

So my heart may stop
But you still have her
My life is over
And I am gone
Because you missed your chance
To become someone
That matters
So as long as I care...
It's fine, right?

It burns more than before
The flame of love
Put out 
My heart yearns for more
But I want to be alone

So I let you be happy
The girl of your dreams
Let her know how you feel
Because now I'm taken
By someone who cares
Someone who won't break my delicate heart
Into a billon peices!

Let them eat cake...
Let me be happy
I know you are
Now that i am dead!


It burns more than before
The flame of love
Put out 
My heart yearns for more
But I want to be alone

Yeah it burns!
Lemme yell it out!
The pain hurts more!
Let it out!
Here you go!
Here I am!
Just let go!

[Iban]

forget forget stuff monday bitch
I can't reach this god damn itch
stuff stuff monday bitch forget
this song is about nip/tuck

brother brother brother brother brother brother brother!
Why you call yourself a brother?
brother brother brother brother brother brother brother!
Because I'm a mother loving brother!

Man, forget that african american bullstuff, I'm a brother.

[Chriz]

I don't really like rap but you should try writing lyrics for rap. Seems to fit you best.

EDIT ; god i really need to stop flashediting ANYWAY it's still bare bones. Can't tell which genre would fit them unless you add the beat you had in mind when you wrote this

stuff forget love rap drugs
prostitutes death monday monday monday
my brother brother brothers hatin haters
stuff ass cunt titties forget depression

[Malestrom]

Actually..

IF IT IS A RAP BATTLE YOU WISH!


IT IS A RAP BATTLE YOU SHALL RECEIVE!

[Iban]

Actually..

IF IT IS A RAP BATTLE YOU WISH!


IT IS A RAP BATTLE YOU SHALL RECEIVE!

oh god white girl rapping

[Azzurolix]

Screw that 50Cent stuff, I hate that too.

What I'm talking about is Eminem. He does think he's black but at least he can sing without blubbering into the microphone and the songs are pretty mature too.

[The Corporation]

brother brother brother brother brother brother brother!
Why you call yourself a brother?
brother brother brother brother brother brother brother!
Because I'm a mother loving brother!

Man, forget that african american bullstuff, I'm a brother.

I hate how today's mainstream rap has ruined the rap genre.

Rap never started out with that crap in it.
Rap with clean lyrics is the best kind to me.

[Night Fox]

oh god white girl rapping

aaaaaaaah laaaaaaaaaahd

[Malestrom]

oh god white girl rapping

xD



I laughed so hard.

[Placid]

Songs are better when they rhyme.
In my opinion.

[Malestrom]

Men are better when they are nice. IMO