Author Topic: Spaceship 'Ignis' Meteor clearer (BAN app)  (Read 3068 times)

Hey guys! i've been looking at BAN for a while now and eventually decided to app :)
LITTLE STORY THING:
In the year 2304 earth became under attack by a alien species, they launched missiles from their planet to ours with devastating effect.
The people of earth wanted to fire back but a quick look at the alien's planet said 'No can do' the planet was surrounded by meteors and asteroids, hundreds of thousands of them that earth missiles couldn't fire through. The leaders of earth had pressure pushing on them, the civilians wanted to hit the aliens back so they quickly designed and built the 'Herpous class' meteor destroyer and sent 200 of them to the planet , this destroyed most meteros allowing missiles to be fired at the planet, after the war the ship was added to nearly all spacefleets so it could make short cuts through meteor fields.
^Yay earth! I wonder how many people will read that :)

Pictures.
The ship:

Back view: (the little white bits are where robots that mend the ship are stored)

Front view:

Bridge:

Engine room:

Control room:


Rate out of 10 :)









dude this is pretty epic, has some flaws tho. 8/10

dude this is pretty epic, has some flaws tho. 8/10
Tell me what flaws so i can improve :)


YES


god damn

now get your ass in my server

It's really nice
But either BAN lowered their standards or you are just friends with them


You show a lot of potential, Fawkes.

I'll have to think this one over for a little while.

You show a lot of potential, Fawkes.

I'll have to think this one over for a little while.
The suspense is killing me D:

i think it could do with some working on    but it looks nice so far

i think it could do with some working on    but it looks nice so far
What needs work?
In my mind its finished.