Author Topic: Japanese Dojo  (Read 4363 times)


I'll let you know in a minute, I've been busy with college work recently.



Wait, isnt Buddha from India or something?

Also, can we rate?

Buddha was an Indian prince who left his palace, saw suffering, and became a monk.

Yes you may rate if you do it politely.

No. Too boxy, lacks detail
"No." doesn't give any consideration towards effort. Stop being an starfish.

I give it a 7.5/10. It shows good effort, and I like the trees and scenery. However, you could make it a bit more complex. You have good support, good coloring, and good placement, but the only thing really missing is complexity, so perhaps work on that.

Very good job overall!
« Last Edit: March 21, 2011, 09:24:01 PM by Custard »

Thank you, will do.

No. Too boxy, lacks detail

I'll go with what Jirue said. I like the concept of the whole thing and I like what you were trying to do but it doesn't look much like a Japanese Dojo.

Nice bui-

-looks at name-


:(

Not to sound mean and I am saying this as the most supportive voice u can imagine but I don't see how this is a Japanese type structure. I believe Japanese dojos or structures have like that unique curvature to it like this one



Unless you were trying to get a modern look like this



Did u did a pretty good job :D

"No." doesn't give any consideration towards effort. Stop being an starfish.

I give it a 7.5/10. It shows good effort, and I like the trees and scenery. However, you could make it a bit more complex. You have good support, good coloring, and good placement, but the only thing really missing is complexity, so perhaps work on that.

Very good job overall!
He submitted this as an app to OWB, I have to give him an answer don't I?  I don't have to rate him at all if I don't want, heck, I didn't even have to tell him why I said no.  You stop being ignorant.

I accept all opions

Make it look more japanese. Oh and I believe budha is chinese not japanese.

He submitted this as an app to OWB, I have to give him an answer don't I?  I don't have to rate him at all if I don't want, heck, I didn't even have to tell him why I said no.  You stop being ignorant.
The title doesn't say so, and neither does the original post. Little did I know that you were just rejecting it from a clan. Not to mention, I've yet to see other voters, so I thought you were just jerking around and denouncing it's status as a Japanese Dojo by stating "no". Ignorance is the arrogance towards learning something, but not knowing something is a totally different situation.

I have a tendency to skip some pure data from time to time as well, so I'm sorry for cracking a whip at you. A fault on my part ^_^
I can get really defensive over stuff-posting on topics with buildings posing signs of good effort.
« Last Edit: March 23, 2011, 12:26:53 AM by Custard »

Here is the main room of the Dojo. Where heroes are bread!

Heroes = Bread?