Author Topic: My Mansion (Follow Up to My House)  (Read 2687 times)

Took the criticism on my house and used on a new build, My Mansion.  It consists of around 11,000 bricks (mainly because I like the classic brick-stack pattern), and yes I know the build has many spammy areas.  If the colours are bad, its because I'm partially colour blind, so I just chose some colours out of the soft collumn.  I went with Greekish style architecture extirior, along with some bachelor style interior.  You guys can rate, and feel free to give constructive criticism.

Whole Build

Living Room

The Den

Master Bedroom

Study

Bathroom (Notice the Golden Throne)

Back Patio

There it is, obviously better than my last build. 

You actually went through the trouble of screenshots of your entire screen...?

It looks alright but there is definitely room for improvement.

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You actually went through the trouble of screenshots of your entire screen...?
I just hit Alt and Prnt Screen
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It looks alright but there is definitely room for improvement.
Ya, I know there is, just finished after stating it friday. 

Please use .png too, .jpegs take forever.


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Please use .png too, .jpegs take forever.
Sorry, forget to use sometimes
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Maybe Ctrl-P ingame?
No, using small-screen windowed format, just hit Alt Printscreen, copy to paint, save

Sorry, forget to use sometimesNo, using small-screen windowed format, just hit Alt Printscreen, copy to paint, save
Or use Control P

ON TOPIC: 1/10

Needs work, I rate it 3/10

0.0001/10
Zeno told me to do it

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0.0001/10
Isn't that like, one 2/4 brick?

6/10
It's pretty fair, but I'm sure you can do better. The fountain is off centered, see, and the overall appeal is lacking.

For your inner walling, don't use brick, use walls, and also make it more sophisticated, because the circular formations on the front make it look unprofessional.
« Last Edit: March 27, 2011, 01:24:20 AM by Custard »

Thanx Custard, your the first person who backed up their rating.  And the circular patterns were just something to give the wall detail, filler, so I get what your saying.

3.5/10.

The main reasons are detail.
  • The TV is with Rainbow FX:

For one, I don't think any TV in the world uses Rainbow as a channel. At least you could make the screen blue (or another random color as you are partialy color blind).
For two, I don't think a normal mansion/house would have a TV stay up 24/7.
  • I know you said you like Brick walls, however, I seriously don't. I hatkethem and shows people are just loving lazy to make a stupid simple wall pattern.
  • House itself looks too small, I dont think I'd call it a mansion.
  • 4 random cars parked on the roadway and it's a MANSION? Don't be surprised if you won't find them in the morning.
  • Furniture is poorly.


And other reasons, but I said enought. 3.5/10 is infact a big rating in my opinion for this sort of build.
« Last Edit: March 27, 2011, 06:14:41 AM by LeetZero »

2/10
I hate the Exterior and Interior, furniture is poorly done.
Although, there is still room for improvement.

2.5/10. No floor patterns/tiles, no interior walls, lacks general detail.