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What is up?

Good!
13 (59.1%)
needs work.
7 (31.8%)
bad.
1 (4.5%)
still needs work
1 (4.5%)

Total Members Voted: 22

Author Topic: [AoB] House App. (AJCW) I lost the save...Bump  (Read 3748 times)

Ok, well, this is round two and i'm more confident than ever, i had a storyline to this house (sorta) but didnt wanna post it :D, any way got a whole lotta pics for ya guys! BRIX:16,712.                              (key: S.S=Screenshot)



















Thnx! Non]AoB's Rate x/10 then if necessary comments! Sorry for pics out of order...
« Last Edit: April 14, 2011, 02:55:05 PM by AJCW »

I really like your attention to detail, but work on your color schemes. Colors are a little...ugly, mismatched, and a little random in places.

I really like your attention to detail, but work on your color schemes. Colors are a little...ugly, mismatched, and a little random in places.
haha yah, i was looking for a unique different color scheme for almost every room. but thanks. can't you vote since your in clan now? also, how does the interveiw work? i know im getting a bit ahead of myself, but im curious.

What the hell is wrong with that fireplace and chimney?  Other than that, this is much better than that last bank stuff app you made.  Good job overall.  Some parts could use improvement but it is good.


Exterior is decent. 7/10 (The house overall needs a dignified look, rather than an unorganized look.)
Greenery is satisfactory 8/10 (Needs more individuality, and separation.)
Interior needs work 6/10 (More organization, and contrast with colors would help.)

Overall 7.5/10

You're a definitely a fine builder, but the only problem you really have with this is the fact that it looks unorganized and less clean than one should expect out of a suburban home.

Keep building, nevertheless. You'll improve overtime, I'm sure. You have the capacity and the potential.
« Last Edit: April 09, 2011, 01:15:17 PM by Custard »

Exterior is unsymmetrical. A big window on the side, and a big middle in the center just doesnt look right.

Exterior is unsymmetrical. A big window on the side, and a big middle in the center just doesnt look right.
sorry, got back from baseball games... anyway, it's not supposed to be symmetrical, that's what makes it different from a cube house...
Exterior is decent. 7/10 (The house overall needs a dignified look, rather than an unorganized look.)
Greenery is satisfactory 8/10 (Needs more individuality, and separation.)
Interior needs work 6/10 (More organization, and contrast with colors would help.)

Overall 7.5/10

You're a definitely a fine builder, but the only problem you really have with this is the fact that it looks unorganized and less clean than one should expect out of a suburban home.

Keep building, nevertheless. You'll improve overtime, I'm sure. You have the capacity and the potential.
ok, thanks, is that a Yes or No? i can improve it be4 you vote if you'd like, after all, it is the weekend, i got time!




I'm not apart of Architects of Blockland, so my vote would mean nothing. However, supposing they have high standards, I'd be on the border.

I'm not apart of Architects of Blockland, so my vote would mean nothing. However, supposing they have high standards, I'd be on the border.
ok, thnx i think :D i'm updating the House so even though it says to, dont vote YET. updating pics later.

The greenhouse is ew.


You can get an accurate look using the slanted windows brick pack.

The greenhouse is ew.


You can get an accurate look using the slanted windows brick pack.
ok!