OWB Application (Old Brick House)

[(Fallen)]

This is my Application for the OWB clan. It has 1081 bricks and if you want me to add more to the interior please ask.

Birds Eye Exterior:


Interior:


Storage Within Roof:


Rate x/10! Constructive criticism welcome

[Ad Bot]

[SlayerZ99]

Im sorry but I have to give it a 3/10, Its a square and not a lot of interior, Keep trying though and good luck!

[(Fallen)]

Thanks Ill do that

[Man 2]

It's not typically good for a the roof of a house to be taller than the actual house. And perhaps if you could stagger the bricks making up the wall of the house (like the brick patterns you normally see in masonry) rather than having them look like a grid; it's more aesthetically pleasing. Just some constructive criticism. 2/10

[oleg662]

I'm sorry, but this needs a lot of work. Theres just nothign interesting about it, at all. It looks like it only took a couple of minutes.

[King Leo]

I'm sorry, but this is nowhere good enough to get you in..
Try to add more detail to the exterior and the interior. You could for example add windows and different rooms.

[Lørd Tøny]

I don't know the words to describe it.

[xXGhostXx]

2/10
-Spam load of bricks on each side
-Empty
-Attic is bleh
-Needs more.........effort

[Sleven]

I don't know the words to describe it.

It starts with a Ha and ends with another Ha.

[cooldawson3]

It starts with a Ha and ends with another Ha.

hmmm.. Why don't you stop being like that, and help him with Constructive things, hm? Like an idea to help him out?

I think it needs more interior, and try to overlap the walls' bricks, like...

|-------|-------|     <this
    |-------| Makes it look a little "cleaner" and try and use bigger bricks next time, to save some brickcount

[Wehrmacht]

i would be insulted if i was tony

[Sleven]

-truth-

Yeah, you're right..  but I just got so surprised when I saw the build, and wrote the first thing that came into my mind.
I expected.. something, more advanced?


And, Wehr. Same here..

[Nom|Aplem|Nom]

h3y guise dis ar 10/10 tottale

Sorry just had to. Anyways this could use quite a bit of work with walls, maybe some windows and more interior.

[Penguin/Person]

Can videogames go on failblog.org?