Japanese Dojo Build

[J MASTER]

Took 2 hours or so.




Rate /10 or whatever you guys like to do.

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[Messes]

Looks really nice, although the roof could be a bit more multi-color in the brownscale.

Otherwise, 7.5/10

[SPooK]

I really like it :) 8.5/10

[J MASTER]

Looks really nice, although the roof could be a bit more multi-color in the brownscale.

Otherwise, 7.5/10

Ohh crap, thanks for reminding me, the pole bricks for decoration were supposed to be white or a lighter brown.

[aml]

I was there after you built that ;-;

The newer one looks better in my honest opinon.

[J MASTER]

I was there after you built that ;-;

The newer one looks better in my honest opinon.

I didn't change anything lol, I just put it in the mountains.

[Trifax]

The roof is messy, and way too congested. It looks like you tried too hard to make a complex Japanese style roof.

The rest of the build looks good.

[J MASTER]

The roof is messy, and way too congested. It looks like you tried too hard to make a complex Japanese style roof.

The rest of the build looks good.

I see where you're coming from, now that I think about it it does look pretty clustered, but originally I wasn't trying to give it a japanese style, I was just experimenting with roof design. In that sense it was my mistake to title it so.

[Trifax]

The rest of the build looks very good, like I said.

To fix the roof, imo, you can do a couple things. Clean up the roof as is, and simplify a little bit, or do a roof style more like this:



work that out for yourself, but I think either of those would leave you with a nice, simple, little japanese hut dealio.

[Sleven]

Pretty neat, however the pond should be removed.

6/10

[Barakuda]

Pond and the roof are pootis.

[KetaTheCat]

Eh, it's good... VERY GOOD. 9/10
And randomness:
We need a hoppah here.

[aml]

I didn't change anything lol, I just put it in the mountains.

But what about that gate thing that was infront of it? :u

[Fragite]

The rest of the build looks very good, like I said.

To fix the roof, imo, you can do a couple things. Clean up the roof as is, and simplify a little bit, or do a roof style more like this:
*pic*

work that out for yourself, but I think either of those would leave you with a nice, simple, little japanese hut dealio.

I don't think that J MASTER was going for the pagoda-look. But I still agree, should be cleaned up.
7/10, though. Great job.

[Unwritten Calender]

I like it, but the roof seems too... intricate for my liking. 7.5, though :)