Author Topic: Blockland Machinima: The Wrench (Read 1647 times)

DrPepper · May 03, 2011, 08:35:44 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=laR5t87P8XA&feature=channel_video_title

I made this for a school project, took a few hours. Please give me feedback of how I did on it, and what I should improve. Thanks.

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Pulchritude · May 03, 2011, 08:48:55 PM

Quote from: DrPepper on May 03, 2011, 08:35:44 PM

I made this for a school project

Probably not the best idea :/

Jairo · May 03, 2011, 08:50:00 PM

Quote from: Pulchritude on May 03, 2011, 08:48:55 PM

Probably not the best idea :/

I agree.
The movie wasn't too well plotted or performed in my opinion.

Fireboy · May 04, 2011, 10:23:30 AM

Quote from: Jairo on May 03, 2011, 08:50:00 PM

The movie wasn't too well plotted or performed in my opinion.

Dillpickle · May 04, 2011, 05:45:06 PM

I'm confused. Theres an airport and a bomber, when theres pirate ships.

Jay the Cartoonist · May 04, 2011, 06:34:58 PM

Awful music choice, meh camera movements, very meh story/plot and extremely meh execution of plot.

MillCzarr · May 04, 2011, 06:40:14 PM

Since airplanes were apparently in the movie, so apparently they were invented, then why are they using ships?

Riot · May 04, 2011, 07:08:40 PM

Quote from: MillCzarr on May 04, 2011, 06:40:14 PM

Since airplanes were apparently in the movie, so apparently they were invented, then why are they using ships?

Apparently yes, apparently because they are pirates.

_Dark_ · May 04, 2011, 07:08:48 PM

Wouldn't you get in trouble in school for the OH SHI- part? Anyways I see a F coming your way.

DrPepper · May 04, 2011, 09:04:16 PM

Quote from: _Dark_ on May 04, 2011, 07:08:48 PM

Wouldn't you get in trouble in school for the OH SHI- part? Anyways I see a F coming your way.

Got a B+ :D

Nethog · May 04, 2011, 09:06:01 PM

what was the assignment

Riot · May 04, 2011, 09:25:00 PM

And don't say it has anything to do with History.

heedicalking · May 04, 2011, 09:29:57 PM

Quote from: Nethog on May 04, 2011, 09:06:01 PM

what was the assignment

Film Production and brown townysis, Chapter 06: What not to do.

DrPepper · May 04, 2011, 09:37:03 PM

Quote from: heedicalking on May 04, 2011, 09:29:57 PM

Film Production and brown townysis, Chapter 06: What not to do.

Haha.

But really, I don't think I did that bad. First time using Sony Vegas.

Jay the Cartoonist · May 04, 2011, 10:09:44 PM

Quote from: DrPepper on May 04, 2011, 09:37:03 PM

Haha.

But really, I don't think I did that bad. First time using Sony Vegas.

For good Machinima standards, you did horrible. For a school project, yeah, you did pretty good. Teachers eat up anything like this no matter how bad you do. I remember whipping up a lego animation in one night on a summary of some book I didn't even barely read in the 4th grade. Everyone loved it.

Teachers love anything they haven't ever seen before. Whether it be machinima from a video game, a diorama made out of legos or whatever.