School Project - 3D Animation (I REQUIRE FEEDBACK!)

[keonesan]

Basically we're having this job fair sort of thing were we had to make our own company. I pretty much hate my entire group because they're morons but luckily they let me do the commercial so they wouldn't forget it up.

Knowing me though I procrastinated last second and threw some stuff together. All the models are made by me and no, I didn't trace. Just making sure since Dan was bugging me about it. Tell me what you think.

Time Spent On Animation: 20-30 Minutes
Time Spent Rendering: 3 Hours
Final Verdict: forget you Blender.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEmJ2X22vCE

EDIT: It's due tomorrow bitches and I need feedback!

[Ad Bot]

[Tom]

bland..
text the walls.

and make the door normal portions. It's too wide right now and the handle is too small.

[Stocking]

You could be a professional developer for a company specializing in Wii games.

[Domidore66]

Meh, the models themselves are OK, but the shadows thrown in make them look really good.

[ArmyUnit]

Nice. I like the glassware especially.

Walls seem empty though..

[keonesan]

You could be a professional developer for a company specializing in Wii games.

I'm not sure if I should take that as a compliment. :/

Nice. The glassware especially.

Walls seem empty though..

Thanks. Probably why rendering took a loving eternity. Shaders, shaders everywhere.

[Stocking]

I'm not sure if I should take that as a compliment. :/

No really! If I didn't trust you so much, I'd swear they used these models in that 007 remake for the Wii.

But then I look again and, yours are actually better and far more detailed.

[Nikki]

The chairs seem a bit too low to the ground in my opinion but other than that, it's nice. A bit empty though, like you threw a bat mitzvah and all you invited were Christians.

[keonesan]

No really! If I didn't trust you so much, I'd swear they used these models in that 007 remake for the Wii.

But then I look again and, yours are actually better and far more detailed.

My sarcasm detector is failing on me today. :s

Still can't tell.

The chairs seem a bit too low to the ground in my opinion but other than that, it's nice. A bit empty though, like you threw a bat mitzvah and all you invited were Christians.

20-30 minutes of effort put into it. Can't expect much. :P

[_Rave_]

Keo that is awesome.
:D

Just the doorknob looks handicapped.

[fred da kiko]

add a product...

[Snaffle J. Bean]

3 hours to render that?

stuff bro, get a better processor.

[ChickenMaster]

Lighting definitely needs improvement, make the walls more exciting, and a rounder, slimmer model for the chairs.
If the new model for the chairs make them seem out of place, just remake everything!

Other than that, camera work, music, etc. is ok.

[Barakuda]

Add some details to the chairs and to the walls. (Paintings, carpets, idk).

[LegendZ]

The first door you see, the lighting is quite dim(disregard this one if you're happy with it because its dark here at home). And add a product? Oh add some paintings or something to the walls.