[C] Application - Office Building

[TwenteFreak]

This is my app for the clan Colleagues.
It's a large office building which is made out of 7305 bricks.
It has no interior because that would make it look worse. Trust me.

Front view. (look at that lovey beast next to the other lovey beast)


Birds eye view from the left.


Birds eye view from the right.


Backside view from the left side.


Backside view from the right side.


Lots of views......


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[Liquid]

My first thought was, meh.
But then I looked a little closer and I can now see this is actually a very nice building.

[TheArmyGuy]

It's good.
But
It could do with some roofing stuff.
It feels empty without interior and roofing, so if you drop interior be sure not to drop the roofing.
Love the little fire escape.
I'm going to say yes because you are a good and fun person that would fit right in, but the build should be improved upon.
7/10

[Barnabas]

You are my favourite African, get in the clan!

[Uncle Bengs]

wow supr gay

[Tally]

I like it but,

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=2553593
http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/6391/blockland00036.jpg

So I don't know It's a no

[Sleven]

This is the only thing you built, that in my opinion is an acceptable app.
The problem is, that this is based on a build from brickshelf. So it doesn't feel fair to say yes.

Your other builds isn't enough, and this one isn't fully yours.
So, it's a no.


Edit: dang, Tally came with proof before me.

[Soviet]

I like you Twente, and this is good.

However, this does not meet Colleagues' standards. It's a no from me.

[EndGame]

It's nice, I'll give it that, but I say no as well.

[Treynolds416]

I think a problem with it nobody has covered is that the brown on top is way too "heavy" in a sense. It doesn't draw the eye, and makes it look like a detailed turd. Otherwise pretty nice.

[HikerBob]

Disregarding the brick shelf factor, if you could add a few more buildings in or be able to manage to fit an interior, you'd boost your chances

[man of smart]

The roof is a bit empty. Maybe add a stairwell or heating/AC?

[Gen. Hothauser]

I think a problem with it nobody has covered is that the brown on top is way too "heavy" in a sense. It doesn't draw the eye, and makes it look like a detailed turd. Otherwise pretty nice.

In between each window layer, add the same color as the bottom to the brick in a striped fashion but dont color the vertical bricks jutting out of the build.  This will cause the build to look lighter in weight.  recolor the back to thes same color as the front and do the thing i suggested on the back.  Add the light tan color to the sides making a corner stone appearance running the edge.

Add interior as everyone had said.

Add a roof entrance/exit like you see in movies and stuff.  Add those reception grids taht you see on those buildings on top.

Street lights? maybe?  Perhaps even a small street?

Add floors absolutely!

[Custard]

If you built this yourself, I would give you a "yes". However, you didn't. Therefor, you showed absolutely none of your true skill at all.

It may take effort to completely copy a building, but actually being creative and designing your own is the best you can do in a game like this, or anywhere for that matter.

Great architects did not copy the work of their ancestors. No! They studied their work, and created their own canvases of wonderful color and dynamics.

I want to see that out of you.

[Blockomanian]

Great architects did not copy the work of their ancestors. No! They studied their work, and created their own canvases of wonderful color and dynamics.

I want to see that out of you.

good luck wit that.