Author Topic: House  (Read 1921 times)

I made a house, and i want to know the flaws. I've been working hard on my building skills so I would like SOME CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. It has a entertainment center (pictured below) also a small kitchen, cupboard, and a bedroom. Below are a few pictures of the house.

I actually like the wall, but the majority of the house is bad

  6/10

Im working on the interior atm. The bedroom is the best part besides the fence.

The fence is well done, but you might need a little work on the interior and exterior of the house. 4/10

It would be cool if it had a secondary color on the design of the walls, but so far not bad.

OK here's the weight lifting thing also. I replaced the walls with bigger bricks where I could. The one wall I show is just 1 the back and opposite side look like that and the front looks a bit different. The kitchen stove is improved I rebuilt it so everytime you click a zero it goes up one so the temperature baking can go up to 999'. The television isn't a flat screen its got a box on the back so it looks like one of those televisions, you can't see it all but I made a Xbox at the bottom the button goes from red to green everytime you click.

It's nice.

The only problems I see is that the inside needs more color, and the furniture needs a little more detail. Other than that it looks great!

I like the fence, but the house needs more color. I'd give it a 5/10.


ew brown

It looks like your in a turd.

Then you added furnishings

The walls look great

That's brown.


That's very, very brown.

It doesn't have a solid feel to it. The second floor's... floor is only a plate thick.  The point at the top of the roof looks strange, and the square box layout of the house as a whole doesn't feel right. The fence seems far too large and ornate for the house itself. There should be some sort of walkway to the door, rather than a stretch of grass.

Don't be afraid to give yourself more space to make things feel right for the size of house you're going for, and make sure it has some definition to it. Make interior walls, rooms and hallways. Don't just place a few objects around the perimeter and call it a kitchen, etc.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2011, 07:21:16 PM by Eksi »


Looks, alright. But what would be good if you put a second wall on the interior so it's not the same color on the outside. The kitchen needs more appliances. Maybe a sitting room would be good too. Makes some nice chairs, maybe a table. And also use a variety of colors. Too much brown. Keep working on it :).