Author Topic: My City  (Read 1326 times)

I would have posted it earlier but there was still some touch-ups to be made. Behold my city. Not ENTIRELY mine, Ben Grapevine made the bank and Peanutglue made 3 houses, but for the rest it is mine. I have hosted it as an RP before... Theres a Restraint (I think thats spelled wrong), a Real Estate, Employment, Bank, LOTs of houses, Ice Cream Stand, Lemonade Stand, A Police Department, Jail, and the hidden "Black Robe" An evil cave place with a fire in the middle and a "Sacrifice" wheel (Sorta like Fable 2). So here it is with all its glory. OH and also, Captain Thomas made the Factory! Just forgot.

I think it could use something more on the outskirts besides just trees, like a pond or perhaps a small hill.
I like it. 9/10
Are there interiors?

I think it could use something more on the outskirts besides just trees, like a pond or perhaps a small hill.
I like it. 9/10
Are there interiors?
NGGGH

7/10
« Last Edit: June 04, 2011, 01:39:32 PM by indyjones »

make it so we can download it.

Great start, it looks like a town from the early 1900s in my opinion. The road crossings could use a little fixing up.

Looks great, you should probably get some interiors for the buildings though

You guys are also rating it without his permission

That's more like a town than a city :x

Looks great, you should probably get some interiors for the buildings though

You guys are also rating it without his permission
I think if my stuff is in there I should be able to rate it.

I think if my stuff is in there I should be able to rate it.
talking to Man 2


It looks nice, the style is good but I don't know. Something about buildings with no interior bothers me.

in the third pic, instead of just trees on the bottom-right corner,
make a park or something.

It could use some touching up with a few more buildings here and a park there then it would look great like in the 3erd picture in the bottom right and left instead of just trees and empty put maybe a park or some more buildings maybe some houses.

             Anyway, permission to Rate?


         If so then I give it a good 8.5/10 but if you get on it and fix it up, it will be a good 10/10